rate_review Reviews

I just started reading this today and I LOVE it! I think it very much deserves the "made of awesome" category. XD
And I really like how I, as the reader, am about as clueless as poor Niles himself, it's fun to be there with him.
Wonderful story!

~jea

Oh wow, pooor Kya. I hope you're keeping her alive. As for Rylan coming over....argh what a cliffie. I can't wait to hear his thoughts about the whole condom thing.

I never know how to review your stories, because "Great" or whatever just doesn't seem like enough. But in lack of anything better to say, I'm really looking forward to reading more! (also, I don't know how I managed to miss FOUR UPDATES! Aargh. Well, at least I had a lot to read this time around, which was nice!)

Wow this just keps gettig better and better. I keep woundering if this is one huge misunderstanding from lack of communication or if this is really just a no love (one sidded) relationship. Keep up the great work.

OH, I LOVE this story so much! It's just beautiful... I love Niles and I love Rylan! I hope they will figure a way to be together.
I don't think Rylan would "cheat" on Niles, he seems honest and true to me, in a strange way, Matilda is so right. But I believe Rylan is afraid of himself, of everything, of the things he does to Niles, maybe he feels guilty for wanting it. And maybe he is as unsure about the relationship as Niles is, which would be a cruel irony. Nobody dares to ask. Gosh, these guys have to talk. It's amazing, normally I don't like this D/s-stuff at all, but here I do, perhaps because so deep feelings are involved. It feels like a real part of their life, not like a cheap movie scene. And they are just so sweet, funny, good boys... I have to stop, I don't know if my terrible English makes any sense (it's still good enough to understand and appreciate this amazing story)... So thanks a lot!

whoah fast update, you're so magical and godlike ^^
um i dont know if im happy or sad now
i hope everything works out but now im so emotionally vested in your characters that im getting paranoid, like what if something even worse is going to happen... T.T
sorry, ignore the crazy
thank you for being such an amazing author

I *love* this story. The interaction between the two is fantastic... Their relationship is just so *fucked up*, but it works, you know? It works so perfectly. I can't wait to see them together

I *love* this story. The interaction between the two is fantastic... Their relationship is just so *fucked up*, but it works, you know? It works so perfectly. I can't wait to see them together! Update soon! =D

OMG You've got me hooked. Niles' POV is really engaging -- you've got messed up teenage boy down pat. I love how he whines so much about how closed off Rylan is, when he's so distant himself. Rylan calls him, and makes the plans, and initiates the sex. The bride thing did make me wonder, though. Was Rylan trying to escape his need for Niles, or making a jealousy play, or what? Inquiring minds need to know!

Oh, and I wanted to add that I loved the female characters as well. It's rare to see good, strong female characters in a slash story, and I tend to not write them just to avoid the drama, but Shona and Matilda and Kya are all great. Can't wait for an update!