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Okay, reviewing as I go. o:

Aww... it makes me sad that they're not TALKING, you know. Theres something holding both of them back, and damnit, it needs to go! But it just totally adds to the story.

I lol'd so hard when this line came up:

"I see what he's doing, feeding his own fish-addiction under the facade of entertaining my younger sister."


GAAWDHH LMFAO I DIED. That's just too funny, seriously. XD

Kya is so cute! ;v; I love that kid. When she asked Rylan if he loved Niles, that whole moment-- I was dying. It was sweet, how he went about it, pulling his leg back and everything.
fklsdijog89uet9iroekadsldnlsfihegowty8eruifasdj Aaaahhh! They talked! Not... in the right way, but they talked DURING SEX. Thats so awesome. ;v; They have very kinky sex, christ. XD I love it so much. This story is amazing. You portray such bold feelings wonderfully, cause I can see the conflict at his feelings and such. ;v; love love love this.

I've read all of your stories on this site and I enjoy them. Of course, I don't know how this story will end yet and I considered waiting to review, but I felt that I should comment on this last chapter because it was masterful. I think that this story has the potential to be your best work. I'm eager for Ryland and Niles to talk and reach some type of resolution, but at the same time I'm able to wait because the characterizatin makes it completely logical for this talk not to have occurred yet. This story to me has a more natural flow than your other stories and I'm looking forward to following whatever course the story takes. Nothing seems forced to me in this story and I think that's a wonderful accomplishment given the subject matter.

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much love for another chapter :] and kya for getting the confession out of rylan. the boys have really A LOT to talk about. though i can understand the procrastination act they're playing. talks like that be scary...
at least there was some "talking" during the sex. always a step in the right dirction, no matter how smal. if only niles contributed more than "what?" ^^' i hope rylan realizes that niles is painfully insecure and confused and not distancing himself. he acts tough and confident but god only knows if it's not an act only...
thank you for this lovely chapter~

ohmygodohmygodOHMYGOD THAT WAS SO GOOD
and and the love! yay!!! i'm so happy right now

Can't say much, but I just love this story!
Rylan's "More than anything" really made me cry.

You know, it's kinda funny how this is in Niles' POV, because it makes me have mixed feeling about Rylan. But then again, reading a story like this is the BOMB :D Ha, obsessed with fish? that's actually pretty interesting XD I've never seen brain sponges before, so I'll go look it up after. And that whole thing with Kya was very cute...a first love...even if she isn't really in love it's still totally adorable! And thanks for the hot scene in the end too X3

You are an amazing writer. I love this story, and that is something I can say for only a select few.

Quite a chapter. Had a mix of things going on. Still sad that Niles hasn't talked yet during sex. Poor guy.

I'm so happy you finally updated! It's a great chapter! I can't wait to read more.