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for It's Like This

by orbitingjupiter

person Anon
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh! the condom incident revealed! and they're finally talking!! YAY!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
person jeazard
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well HELL NO you can't end the story here!
Because I admit I was far more interested in their love life resolve thing than Niles's sister's cancer, but now I want to know how that turns out, too. And then I wouldn't mind more of that beautiful hot sex you write. Wouldn't mind at all (read: CRAVE it).

"I'm an adamant disciple of avoiding an issue until it goes away."
Makes two if us, Niles! It's a wonderful way of problem solving, EXCEPT when relationships are concerned. DAMN, huh? Congrats on working it out!
person sparrow9
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you can't end it there ok maybe the romance part but maybe a little quick phine conversation with a little bit about Kya conditio. Maybe a year or two down the road. Okenough about the future about this chapter Loved it, I loved the smotion you put into just a few sentances. I could feel Rye anger. Well if you do decide to end it here just know that I love this story even if it was only supposed to be tep chappters.
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm starving for another chapter over here! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!
person deviouss622
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have you foresaken us?
person jeazard
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it me or did it suddenly get extremely hot in here?
Oh, of course, it's the boys! *fans self*
That. Was awesome.
Love how Rylan is so wonderfully dominant. XD
person Devious622
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just because it is a hot sex scene does not make it smut. But it was awesome! I love the interaction with all the characters, and I love that they are talking even if it is a little dysfunctional.
person annushka
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! their relationship is a bit weird but it should improve hopefully since they should start communicating soon (because it's kind of disturbing at times). I love the characters, you wrote them extremely well, and they are really believeable and loveable. As always I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i still wonder why rylan freaked out about the condom...i don't think they'll ever talk about it...
ASOTA
person Elizabeth
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That leg touching detail was so romantic. Thanks!