rate_review Reviews

It is great! I love it. I always love your stories. And your character development is so good. Everyone has had things, like Niles, that they wanted to say in a relationship, but just couldn't make themselves say. Man! That is so disastrous. Anywho, keep posting stories. It is nice to get intelligent stories that seem real. No off the wall crazy fantasy. Just real people having normal, everyday real problems, often created by themselves. That is the way I see your stories. I really enjoy that!

Should you end the story here?
!!!
You've got to be fucking kidding me =O
Noooooooo!
At least an epilogue. Please. Or sequel. Or prequel. Please.
='(

I think that you could find ways to continue the story once you've had some time away from it. I think that their having a real conversation was so monumental to the story that it seems like it is over in a sense, but I feel that there are a few loose ends. I think Shona's reaction would be good to add because her opinion was so rampant earlier in the story. I think some type of closure should be given to Matilda's illness and because I like to read your sex scenes I would have liked to have a full one at the end of chapter 10 or at least another one to show any changes in their sex-life and in their daily interactions since they've expressed their feelings. But I've enjoyed what you've written. I respect whatever decision you make and look foward to what you write in the future.

Please don't end it. There's still so much that needs to happen. Matilda's illness and what happens to their relationship and stuff like that.

XO It really broke my heart to see Rylan argue with Niles like that but...it's all good in the end :3 And that makes me a very happy person. agh, I can relate to this story even if I haven't found someone like Rylan yet. And if I do, I hope that I know just how to fix us up :] Thanks so much for writing this! and on the matter of leaving the story here, whatever you feel is right is what you should do. The last words were beautiful too...

you cannot end this story!!! it's too amazing! please add more chapters!!!

cuuute!!! *Seriously squealing of fangirliness* moremoremore :P

aww. that was beatiful
and very sweet
I think I want to cry now but I'm not sure why
um... thank you. You write very well.

Noooo, don't end it here! We need to know what happened with Kya! And also Shona needs to give Rylan a piece of her mind because this chapter makes it seem like the undefined relationship is all Niles' fault. Pleeeasssee?

you could leave it like this, but i think i'd cry if you did. man. this story is... amazing. well, you're pretty amazing with writing. but this is... really a favorite of mine. i guess it's because... i can relate, i don't know. i hope you either edit this last chapter and write more, or... at least do a nice little epilogue. well, i'm sure you will, either way. but i know i want more... it was maybe kind of sudden, but at the same time, that's... still realistic, you know? bah.