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i hope a muse visits you shortly!
ASOTA

The funeral was sad, poor Kya. Good luck coming up with what's next.

Eee! Finally, they FUCKING TALKED THINGS OUT. This makes me so happy. At first I thought Rylan was going to leave, and something would happen, but thank god it didnt. Awww, I'm so happy they're together. I really hope you continue, but leaving it at this wouldn't be terrible. I loved this to bits. <3

aww...the kids says 'i love you' for the first time, and it's in an argument. but it's sweet. love the chapter! i'm really enjoying this story.

That was a sweet ending? I think you could end it there. Hard to imagine what would come next. But an epilogue would be sweet and appropriate I think.

So I read your whole story in one go and I have to say it was brilliant! I love love Ry and Niles, I love love the hot hot sex, and even more so, I love theyir obvious devotion to each other despite both of their confusions about it. Thank you for writing an excellent story. As for the ending, I thought it was very good, but is it ok for me to beg for an epilogue? Let us know how things turn out with Kya and how the lovebirds are handling the new turn in their relationship. Thanks again! Now I have to go read your other fiction~

Great story!! Finally!!! They talk!! Or one of them talks and the other
mostly gets to hear what he finally needs to!!!
I don't know if it needs another chapter, (although I love these two!)
It's up to you!!!! I can read this stuff forever!!!!!!

Thanks,
R

Please don't stop writing this story. We have to find out what happens to Kya. Also now that Niles and Ry have cleared the air how will their relationship change? Niles thought he wanted to acknowledge this feeling and validate the relationship but how will he feel if they are out, out to everyone and everywhere will he deal with it well, will he need reassurances? What happens if now that he is out other guys start hitting on him? Is there a reason why he likes his sex so rough? I don't know I'm trying to give you ideas, but really I'm not that creative, I just like the story and I don't want it to end.

No! More please! I love this story so much and I wanna see them work it out and turn this into a real relationship. And what about the little sister? You cant end there!!!!!!

Please?

I can feel how liberating talking must be. It's somehow ironic, both of them waited so desperately for the other one to talk, nobody dared to do so... I'm so happy for them now.
The chapter was beautiful, and it's a good ending - but I'd really like the story to go on. To hear about Niles' sister, how their relationship changes, how other people react... I would miss these characters so much.
But I understand if you need time to be inspired... so I'm grateful for ten brilliant chapters, and patiently looking forward to anything that comes.