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Oh, sweet and funny and moving as always! Rylan is amazing. I just love him so much, playing with the kids, his fish-obsession, his way to dress, his dominance concerning sex, his sweetness and humour...

Forgot to say I liked them switching roles last chapter, I would like to read drunken Niles topping in a more explicite way... Sounds fun.
And speaking of things I'd like to read: I miss Shona, would love more talks between her and Niles. And to see her interact with Rylan - I'm not sure how those two get along. And I'd like some insight in Rylans life, how he grew up, how he lives...

But take your time, every new chapter is great and definitely worth waiting! One of the best stories of all times!

Thank GOODNESS the story isn't ending here and I love the fact that they're FINALLY talking! Can't wait for more~!

Thx for another BEAUTIFUL part!
"Beautiful" in ways of story, not what actually happened.
Except the boys talking, that was nice. :) I like how they slowly sort their relationship out, like what should hav happened years ago is slowly being caught up with.
Go you!

i like deep this is, how it's not just superficial skirting over the problems and everything magically works out all right.
it makes it even better when somethings do work out well

Wow! This story is really good. I love the slight bdsm in their relationship and I love that Niles, who is bigger and from their descriptions it seems like he would more likely be the top, and yet he is completely perfect as the bottom. I loved the confrontation between them, and I felt like I was just understanding just like Niles was for the first time. This is great!

Ya I'm so happy you continued to update. i like how your still makeing them uncomfortable around each other its much more relistic then being 100%. Keep up the grat work.

Cute ^^ And so endearing. The first half of the chapter, I mean. Really, I couldn't have kept the silly grin off my face while reading it if my life had depended on it. Just... cute. Niles was. Rylan too, though in a different way. Less naive. But Niles-naive is good. At the risk of repeating myself to the point of being annoying - cute :>
Even the image of the two of them clinging together left a nice and fuzzy feeling in my chest. Even if what led to it was terribly sad. But you have to give it to Kya. She's one brave and grounded girl, optimistic in spite of the circumstances. Gotta admire her.
As for you ending the series... what can I say, if you do, I will miss them :( I really got attached to them ^^' But if, in order to extend the plot, the understanding between them would get severed... i think I'd really hate that :< They're finally THERE. I don't want then to have to struggle again to be together. Them struggling together against something else is fine with me, though :P (as long as they ACTUALLY get to be together in the process).
OK, who am I to decide on the plot, right? Especially since till now I had no reason to complain :P
So. Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work ^^=

Umm... did I miss something? When exactly did Niles fuck Rylan? Oo

Oh, the funeral scene was so intense. Hard to read, but beautifully written.
I love Niles and Rylan so much, more from chapter to chapter. All the other characters are amazing, too.
Great story!

DO NOT COME UP WITH AN ENDING! I NEVER WANT THIS STORY TO END! omg... i'd die... because i love this story. keep up the excellent work!