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for It's Like This

by orbitingjupiter

person Desert Creature
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congrats. Assuming that you're unpublished, you're the first of that category ever to post a story that was so good, it kept me awake at night because I didn't want to put the story down. You'd have to know my voracious reading habits to know how significant that is. Again, under the assumption that you've not published a story in hard-copy, I hereby demand that you do so.
person jeazard
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it's so sweet that they actually CAN talk things out, and that sometimes it's just that simple. :)
person Koira
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice one =)
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That poor guy. He doesn't need anyone to torment him when he does so very well himself. I really like the sweetness that's entered the relationship. It makes the story for me. Great work. Really enjoyed the read.

KD
person ariesgirl
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh yay!
i love it when you update
and i'm really glad that there's gona be more, i really love Niles and Rylan. They're just amazing.
*bows down to your awesomeness*
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Damn it, you made me cry over his little sister and the cancer boy! The characters are full fleshed and interesting, and its fascinating to watch them as their relationship grows and changes. And the added burden of the fact that Niles is a bit submissive, and so not 'normal', is also quite interesting. It's never easy for people to accept themselves if they're not 'normal'. Luckily he has Rylan, who adores him...Keep up the good work and thanks for writing this. -Dl
person Rachel
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story so much. They are absolutely perfect for each other. ^^ I hope your next story arc won't be too hard on them.
And oh my god, I LOVE Kya. I wish my little sister was just like her. She is AMAZING.
person annushka
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH, neil is gone a bit crazy over a "detail" once more, I love the way he obsesses about things... Though I love it too when problems get solved as well, don't let him obsess too long!
person devious622
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story a lot. I don't evn care about the long breats, it makes me like it even more.
person rain
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there,

i just wanted to leave you a note that you´ve got yourself another admirer :)
i love them, took me all night to get through the chapters.. i really enjoyed it!!
thanks a lot,
(and keep going..!)
rain^^