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excellent definitely want to see were this goes will she wont she hhmmm.....?

UPDATE!

when are you going to update????????????? when when when?

Thanks everyone for the reviews, they really do make a writer's day.

To a: thanks for the feedback. Well, he's a 14 year old guy with hormones, as far as he's concerned his assignment is to bang the teacher. If you've read the "Babysitter" story, you'll know that the tutoring was just an excuse to continue seeing each other but Rachel's decided to take it seriously. This will play out in future chapters.

Crossing her arms, that's a good suggestion. I didn't think of that. Rachel is basically a BIG tease. She knows very well that the hands above the head is sexually provocative pose, and spurring him on is what she's really after. And being female, anything he wants, she wants the opposite. He wants her to undress herself, she wants him to do it. This chapter is a bit of a battle of wills - that in the end they'll both win. ^_^

Have I mentioned I hate you? I check this story roughly ten times a day.

That said, having read what you posted, the battle of wills bit is going brilliantly so far although whatever the bloke's name is seems to be winning right now. Personally, glad you decided to continue this story, Rachel is ruddy brilliant, she is.

omg!! haha that was a tease, more please, but i love that you continued, please more, *for some reason I have a lot of comments on this, hopefuly it's not too much*...i like the new summary...i don't understand ""banging the teacher, do my assignments.""...is that banging the teacher is doing my assignment?...lol okay i'll lessen what i was going to write because it's way picky and too much...but nice descriptions and dialogue..."She raised her arms up over her head in a mock surrender gesture. "Make me."" i like this but i thought it would be better if she crossed her arms in front of her rather than raise her hands because that seems submissive and opposite to what you're trying to portray

I officially hate you. Hate, hate, hate, hate you. Teasers should be illegal.

On another note, looks great. If you need any beta help, let me know, I'd be totally psyched to help out.

I want more, this stuff is seriously hott.

I've read both this one and Babysitter. I think you are a very talented author. For name suggestion, Sam is a pretty cool name. Or Tyler, Justin, Kyle. Haha, but yea, keep up the good work!!

I don't think it should be wrong. I'll have to clarify the summary. Sylvan _is_ the Sylvan Learning Center - as in they don't have anything on a hot blonde when it comes to tutoring (when she gets around to it, that is). That's not his name. I still haven't settled on one yet. Toying with Billy as in Billy the Kid, but I don't love it. Still open to suggestions. ^_^