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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, love the premise, looks like it is going to shape up really well. Only one complaint-- fourteen??!! Dude, nasty. That's not even underage, that's pedophilia. Maybe if he were sixteen or seventeen it'd be cool, if a bit young. But fourteen is gross, hopefully you'll fix it or something.
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start. I really like Jake so far; he's adorable. Can't wait to see what experiences he has coming up!
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It seems to be getting really exiting :D please update again soon! :D
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue..the story sounds really interesting..i still dont know what the couples could be..there are a lot of options..but anyways, please please update! Thid was a great start, you've got me hooked and addicted. Update soon, I can't wait for your next chapter..lol, I'm very impatient, sorry. Update, Update, Update..ladiddada. okay, me done.
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, never read an original pirate-story, it`s really an interesting idea.
I can`t wait to read more!!
I like your kind of writing and could imagine the ship and the persons really good, though I`m not a native english speaker...
Mica
I can`t wait to read more!!
I like your kind of writing and could imagine the ship and the persons really good, though I`m not a native english speaker...
Mica
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. It's not the usual cliche and uninspired types of stories.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great start!!! ^^ I can't wait to read more!
I wonder what's gonna happen to the poor kid now?? And who's that man? Can't wait to know! :)
Jake's 'uncle' really is a bastard! >>
Thanks for the story! *hugs*
I wonder what's gonna happen to the poor kid now?? And who's that man? Can't wait to know! :)
Jake's 'uncle' really is a bastard! >>
Thanks for the story! *hugs*
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like, so far. I think you should continue. =D
Update soon!
Update soon!
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this one too. I love adventure romances.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon! This seems to be a interesting story :D