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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. How love how exotic and feral you've made Vish. It's like his raw masculinity leaps off the page. Poor Nathianel doesn't know what he's getting himself into, does he? It was a shame that the priest had to die...
You've made yourself a fan. Thanks for the introduction. I look forward to any and all future chapters.
You've made yourself a fan. Thanks for the introduction. I look forward to any and all future chapters.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked your opening. Then it became confusing because it seemed the priest was everywhere and then dead. ;-) The plot now thickens in the second chapter and it is definitely getting interesting again. Thanks for sharing your story!
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! More please?
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're basing this in India? hehe. kewl. its well written.. a little puzzling perhaps, not confusing.
you've introduced the assasin ( i assume) in the first chapter. he definitely seems interesting. :D
ill looking for your next update.
you've introduced the assasin ( i assume) in the first chapter. he definitely seems interesting. :D
ill looking for your next update.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love your story already ^.^
please update soon i'm really curious about what is going to happen next
please update soon i'm really curious about what is going to happen next
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do like it.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!! I can't wait to get to know this mysterious man :D
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story, and your other one that I just read, seem very promising. I can't wait to see how both of them are going to turn out.
I love your writing style, babe. Hurry up and review for us.
I love your writing style, babe. Hurry up and review for us.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a really interesting start
cant wait to see where you take it
good work
cant wait to see where you take it
good work
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more,please update soon.UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!