rate_review Reviews

This is such a sad story. I feel so bad for Brit... Chad is an asshole. He really does need to stay away. Is Jayce going to find out about this? God, update soon!

Oooh. Things are getting interesting. Seems like Jayce is jealous? Can't wait to see more. Brit was actually the girl to Chris Crocker? Damn. Lesbian action. I feel a bit bad for Brit... He's a messed up little tramp but I kind of like him. I have the urge to force feed him and he isn't even real.

Oh and he has cool hair. And I hate Chad right now.

12 positions? (Yes, that part stuck with me ;]) That's amazing. 13 inches? That's also amazing. Okay I definitely like the sex scenes here. For someone who barely eats, Brit has so much energy for that. XD

Anyway, lots revealed here. Brit is so complicated. I don't know what he wants or even who he wants. I can't wait to see more so I can at least wrap my head around this gorgeous nut case. As for Jayce, well now he's fallen into the vortex that is Brit Valentine. What happens next, I don't know but I need to see more!

i realy luv this story. britt is hallarious. ur plot is just a little confusing to me. it seems like u jump around without really going into detail. but please continue to update

First off, I'd like to say that I'm glad you went to third person POV. The 1st person POVs were confusing because everyone seemed to be able to read everyone's thoughts, lol.

Anyway, I like this story. Brit is quite the interesting, jaded little bitch, but I like him anyway. I like Jayce too. I thought Colton was cool, until that last scene and now he just seems like a jerk to me...

When it comes to technical issues, I think some scenes could use a little more detail in the actions, but other than that, I do like your style. Keep it up!

~C~

Poor Brit. The way he handles this so nonchalantly makes me wonder when he's just going to go nuts and knife everyone. So is he going to give this Cameron guy a call or is he too close to Colton? Whatever, I'm just glad this updated and I can't wait to see what else happens! You're welcome for the reviews, by the way. I'm surprised it doesn't have more because this story just plain old rocks.

This has the promise of a really great story. Chronology is interesting,and left me wondering and of course assuming and wondering more if my assumptions will turn right. The main character gets fleshed out rather quicky with great poignancy. That is a talent! Smart dialogue and pointy description - I really like that.

The only slight criticism is that, introducing too many characters in a short time makes it a little hard to follow. So fare we have 6-8 characters.

I will definitely watching for updates. Thank you :)

I love Brit, even though he's terribly bitchy. I giggled at the Jeffree Star comment. I can't wait to see where this goes. Stories with pretty boys with tattoos and piercings are always good. Oh and so are big anorexic hips, I guess.