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by Landfall

person Tahn
schedule June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Cupid is funny. What happens next?
person M.Storm
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is just to funny
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is hilarious! the relationship between Mitchell and Cupid is perfect. as im reading this it reminds me so much of one of those animes where a normal character encounters something out-of-this-world and is flung into some random adventure. if that's what you were aiming for, you nailed it. write more!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha! this is hilarious! I don't even know where to start really. I mean, there's so much cool here right now, and so many ways this could go! will Mitchell and Cupid end up together? Mitchell and Diamond? haha, I mean, Cupid's got the pizzazz and the cute, empty-headed charm, but Diamond, even in his brief cameo, could potentially grow into someone a lot cooler? that's the thing, I don't know and I'd really, really like to find out!

stories like these (the sane character more or less thrust into a zany situation) are always tons of fun, and you do their interactions so well that their conversations flow flawlessly. and, like I said earlier, on one hand a part of me is hoping that a love story will blossom between the two of them, but on the other hand I also think that could be considered cliche (no matter how adroable and hot Cupid is) as well as sort of desiring to see some of Mitchell or the other characters introduced up till now have a chance to shine as well.

but, regardless, amazing job man. the little one-liners, like where Cupid just obviously makes bull-shit up as he goes along, and then gets distracted, and then yells at Mitchell for not following his crazy train of thought? totally endearing. you've managed to construct one hell of a mighty fine character here, it's just fantastic! please write more, I just gotta know how it ends!
person Aphelion
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally, a work in the humor category that is actually humorous, and a school themed fic that ain't like the predictable crappy cliche pricks. Keep up the awesome work.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, awesome story! can't wait to see what comes next!!
person Saminada
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is so funny!! I want Mooooooooooreeeee!!!! :p
I wonder what the cupid really wants?? And will he be going to school with Mitchell from now on?!
haha I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! Plz update asap! *hugs*
And Thanks alot for the story! ^^