rate_review Reviews

the whole thing was soooo funny with the cop! but a lovely lemon

Wooo! Another one! Thanks for the stories! I just love these characters! There needs to be more!

awww loved this!! absolutely wonderful, the whole role-play thing. very interesting : )
looking forward to more stories from you!!!

had me going for the longest time... thought you were really doing an OOC PWP...
which would of been hot... but the end was so... so... it made it all better

Now, I've read everything in your originals except Rooftop and I can genuinely say I'm looking forward to it though I don't know if you can top my fondness I've grown for this couple right here. I never thought I'd like a pushy uke but I love this couple and the way you've presented them is wonderful. Now on to the actual review: You had me going for a moment and I thought this was an AR/AU on how they could have met but as soon as the cop interrupted them I was like "ooooh," and I thought brilliant. I loved it. I hope to see more oneshots involving this couple since I've grown to like them so much. Thank you for all the interesting reads. Keep it up.

Okay, now I've read all of your Kale and Vander stories and I have to say that I totally love those characters! They make such a sweet couple. The prostitute one-shot was too cute--Kale's emabarrassement at getting caught adorable! I even recommended the stories to a friend. I appreciate the time and effort that you put into giving us such entertaining reads. I hope to see more of this pairing in the future. Thanks!

~Rin

This story confused me for a split second. i kept wondering. " when was Van a hooker? when did this happen?" than i realised it was all rpleplay and it made my brain click... seems even though ive read all Kale and Van's storys and i should know them inside and out... you still pull a fast one over my eyes. ha.
excilent work once again.
BRILLIANT!

nice

van and kale...by far my fave couple ever! car sex=hot and love the cop interruption. keep writing! (hopefully more oneshots) omg van should visit kale at work and have sex in th supply closet! or you could write a valentine day one!

Shit, could you make this anymore awesome then it already is?! OMG! I loved it! At first I was like, oh they have to be doing something kinky but then I started to get worried and think oh they're not a couple from Love Me! But again, I got really happy when at the end they were just role-playing. ^^ The lemon help too, nothing hotter then having sex in a car! LOL I hope to see more stories from you soon! Keep up the great work!