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This is the second time I've read this, I can't get this story out of my head. This time around I felt stronger emotions reading each chapter, and it was an entirely different experience for me this time. I really enjoy your creations.

okay. let me begin by saying how much I love the charas you have, and that I hope you're v. proud of your writing. I've been reading your work for years, four or five now, and I have never been disappointed.

Mecca. Every time I read that name I hear symbolism, and it's not lost on me. I didn't realize how old she was because I am younger and I struggle with some of the things she does, though I wont go into that. Her character is embedded in my mind and I want to read more about her.

Daniel.....hmmm Daniel. What drives his need for emotion, for love? Is he ready for that responsibility. I need to know more about him, and his phobia for speaking his mind.

This isn't about fairytale gender segregation to me. I read about two people who want that moment, that ecstasy that makes them commit. They are yearning for acceptance and just one stoke of good luck instead of bad memories for a bedfellow. But that's just me. Keep writing.

Okay, so it took me a crap load of time to review but here i am finally!! It's me nirE your ever devoted follower!! I am totally in love with these two. This story isn't like your InuYasha fics, and I think i might like this one more than some of the others but anyfart. The characters felt so real and genuine. I totally expected Mecca to cry out 'I love you' at the end but I am so happy she didn't. hahahaha, you really do cease to ammaze me and excuse my poor spelling and grammar blah blah it's about 12:15 and I just had a major douse of smut. So I thank you and hopw for more from you! (meaning... are you gonna finish your Inufics?!?!) hahahaha

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Nire

I just wanted to tell you that I love this story it is really good. I can’t wait for next chapter. The characters fells very real. Keep up the good work and please don’t stop writing this story.

I've read Black's Magic. Very refreshing with a black girl & average-looking white guy in erotica. This sequel's okay. The cemetery bit might turn some people off, but I don't mind. Very good clear precise writing style & wonderful job with the characterization. Sex ain't bad either. lol

Though why's Chapter 3 a rerun of the end of Chpter 2?

Soo any idea how long it's gonna take her to gamble on him again?

Slightly unsettling, but ultimately satisfying. This piece has plot, and after the sexily sweet scene in the cemetery, I can't imagine where you'll take us from here. The two characters have great chemistry, and it's clearly more than just sex between the two of them. This is a rare piece of fiction, and you have a rare talent. Till next time.