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for The Sea's Heart

by bellesang

person Mia
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice update!! I'm really starting to see a plot forming here!! Great job!:D Update Quick!!
person HannaFO
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting :D I don't think i have ever read a story like this one. Please update again soon!!?
person skyblue
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lolz~ this chpt is nice! ^_^
person Spawn of Dork
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story.
It's really unique and easy to get into.
Keep it up!

Lol, the new queen.
person audrii
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh my god, im in love with this!
seriously, i can't wait to read more!!!
please dont just leave this here, write more, and soon!
person janas
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great first chapter...so long, it feel like soo much as happened
totally unexpected at the end...you know when i read the summary and the story i thought the big secret was that the Captain was a man...lol i was soo wrong
update soon
i love how detailed everything is
person lana
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^ haha, oh my god, i thought the captain was a man too!!

you COMPLETELY took me by surprise and have won me over for doing so.

this is a lively, creative, and enjoyable story to read, i can't wait to see more.
person Fan
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very original! This story has definitely caught my interest. I can't wait to read more.
person ym
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I have ever read a story quite like this one, it is very well done. I will definitely stay tuned to see where this story goes.
person gold
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*___* this has a lot of potential. I hope you don't give up on it and i can't wait to see where you take this!

:) Please don't end it here~!