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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, you have a total gift for writing stuff that's totally adorable without being saccharine. The only thing I would quibble with is Caden's MO. It seems odd that he would waltz into the man's car without setting up the payment deal first. Most guys looking for prostitutes do expect to pay them, and at the very least Connor should represent him. If Caden doesn't get paid, after all, then neither does Connor. But that's a minor thing. I really loved Caden's earnestness, how he still craves touch even though he's a prostitute. I hope this story gets updated soon.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw that was good.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. It was a good chapter.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Caden is adorable! I hope everything turns out alright for him. I would interested to read more about him.