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for He's Too Nice For This

by squirrelactivist

person Shota
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor kid. He sure makes a lousy prostitute. I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
person anon
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definetly love this story and think you should continue! Update ASAP!!!
person Bbritishchik
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love this, its so cute. I can't wait to see what happens. Oh and the sex scene was pretty decent for the situation. Maybe making them a little more discriptive and a tad bit longer, but aside from that it was great. Will be watching for next update.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far. Caden and Vince are both adorable, I want them to fall in looooveee... *_*. Plus, you write wonderfully :). Pleease keep going.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, That was cute!
person L
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely little story! I sincerely hope you are not one of those people, who get everybody else excited over a new story and then forget to update :P
person Saminada
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just one word: HOT!!! ^^
I really liked the chapt! And don't worry! Ur smex scene was really good! And Hot!
Plus I do like ur style alot! I'm glad Caden wasn't brutally raped or hurt!! *sights in relief* He seems to be a really good kid!
It's sad that he has to prostitute himself like he does tho... Maybe Vince will be able to help him again? He was more then generous! What an awesome guy! I hope he'll go for Caden again ^^ ehe

Thanks alot for the story! I really can't wait to read more of this! *hugs*
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwww...
person King Coco
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job! It wasn't too detailed or left out a lot of things. You did very well, even though this was your first. I enjoyed it and hopefully, will see these two again? :)
person Kryst Sutures
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to more of this. Caden really is too cute for this... Doesn't sound nearly as plain as he thinks he is. As for Vincent, he's so sweet. What a shocker. I can't wait to see how they meet up again.