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I love the poor but cute Caden. I hope his life gets a better turn. Please UPDATE soon, because I can't wait for more! *jumps up and down in anticipation*

It´s very good and have great potencial. hope you keep updating...

poor caden!!! maybe vince is his light...
ASOTA

so good to see more,it was very nice

Vince seems like such a sweet guy. Well, I guess. So far at least. Poor Caden. The other whores are just jealous because he's adorable and isn't all gross and jaded like they are. Even though he seems quite miserable. Conner needs to be shot or something; he's awful! It's not Caden's fault he didn't make money... But I do feel bad about snickering at the nickname "Katie". Can't wait to see how the visit with Vince goes... Sex would be hot, no doubt, but I don't want them to beat themselves up over it... I like them too much. But I guess angst is cool, too. I ramble a lot. So, yeah. Love it. XD.

I'd first like to say that I really enjoy this story. The writing is excelent with a good flow and a real sense of the characters. I also don't think it's unrealistic that C. wouldn't be paid all the time because people are bastards and he seems the timid enough type that people would take advantage of him and there isn't a lot he can do about it. Why pay for sex when you can slap the guy around and get it for free is probably a popular notion in regards to prostitutes like C. I look forward to the next update whenever that might be.

Great story. I love the characters.

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ow,,it's such a sweet story....i like it...hopefully there will be more of it

Aww, thats so sweet and sad. Cant wait to see how this turns out! Loved the sex scene, very hot!Great chapter, update soon please!!!