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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Confusing in the begining but good... Continue please
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that. I get get Maria/the missus's way of thinking. I've gone that route while fighting bouts of depression. Its nice to hide some things by taking on a new identity sort of speak. I know I'm only one review but I would be interested in seeing more. Wishing you well
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was different from anything I've read in a while, meaning in a good way. The way your portrayed Maria seemed very authentic and though I can't really relate to her situation, she dealed with the cheating as I could see the "perfect" housewife doing. I'm also very fascinated by Maria's way of viewing herself, her mind seems complex.
Superb writing, I hope you plan on continuing this story, it's very interesting. So I shall eagerly await your next installment!
Superb writing, I hope you plan on continuing this story, it's very interesting. So I shall eagerly await your next installment!
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was excellent. you did really well at getting into her mindset
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm confused...was there an update?
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was very disappointed when I tried to click to the next chapter, and found none. Very difficult subject matter. Jolty writing due to very correct point of view. But, it's so organic as well.
Nice.
KD
Nice.
KD
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo I liked it hehe, thats one seriously messed up woman!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're truly a wonderful writer. You have a unique style and an understanding of the english language that can be difficult to find now a days.
Please, continue, because this story is absolutely enthralling.
Please, continue, because this story is absolutely enthralling.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you married? If not, it's obvious.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love crazy first-person narratives! Very creative, very well written.