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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I really like how you didn't reveal everything all at once. Some authors take the mystery out of the story when they do that. Anyways, keep up the great work. Thanks for posting the 2nd chapter so fast.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very intersting story. You really know how to keep on the suspence.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. I don't know if you are planning to continue updating as often as you are, but you write beautifully, and I personally thought that the gang-rape thing was rather hot. I want more action with the Queen of Diamonds, personally. He's sexy.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm LOVING this story,keep up the good work and please update soon.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm addicted to this story and I LOVE the frequent updates!!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your wicked story. ;-) I love the torture, but I confess I'm not sure where you're going with the plot. We're still not sure who those other characters are and what the evil plot promised in the Summary is at this point in Chapter 4. Looking forward to more! :-)
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well ur right about that! I am pretty confused! >>
I just wonder who those guys are (or whatever they are)??
And darn! It looks to be pretty creepy down there! O__O
And who's living in a place like that? The way Drake described it, it sounded disgusting....
And I must say, even tho I didn't get it all (where he is and all), I still think that it was well written, so I really did liked it! ^^
Plus, u picked my curiosity so I can't wait to see what's gonna happen to the little guy! ><
Thanks for the story!*hugs*
I just wonder who those guys are (or whatever they are)??
And darn! It looks to be pretty creepy down there! O__O
And who's living in a place like that? The way Drake described it, it sounded disgusting....
And I must say, even tho I didn't get it all (where he is and all), I still think that it was well written, so I really did liked it! ^^
Plus, u picked my curiosity so I can't wait to see what's gonna happen to the little guy! ><
Thanks for the story!*hugs*
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty interesting start. It looks like a vampire story, but one can't be sure :) Will be reading next chapter to see where this goes.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa, i love this story!! i want him and the vampire to team up, conduct a prison break, and become lovers on the run!! :D i wonder what on earth the jailers are getting out of this odd arrangement??
i can't wait to see what's next!
i can't wait to see what's next!