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November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A very intriguing tale so far.... I do hope to see this continued. It's wonderfully complicated and hot - and has that edge of danger and darkness and the paranormal to spice it up even more. What dialogue you've had (understandably limited) has been excellent, and the interactions between the characters is brilliant.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey there very interesting story. i guess you abandoned it? well that`s too bad!
i would have loved to see where you were going with it!
i would have loved to see where you were going with it!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story!!
...sorry, but i couldn't help thinking that while the kid had his serious revelational talk with the ace guy, he still had a vibrator stuck up his ass....hahahaha......
i love the plot!
...sorry, but i couldn't help thinking that while the kid had his serious revelational talk with the ace guy, he still had a vibrator stuck up his ass....hahahaha......
i love the plot!
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG TWINS?!! scary! poor drake!!
the history behind everything is incredibly intriguing.
p.s. kraven is hot!
the history behind everything is incredibly intriguing.
p.s. kraven is hot!
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely getting even more interesting. I like how you put so much thought into the background of the story. I can't wait to read more and maybe meet "father".
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really unique plot I must say. ^^ I would have never thought about a deck of cards in that way. This is pretty ingenious. And yeah a lot of info I'm trying to digest it all. Anyways update soon! ^_^
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if drake would just become a pawn just like vandeline, why hasn't someone changed him already then controlled him??? and i keep getting this picture of drake going up to Father and saying "Grandpa...?" haha.
good story though!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
good story though!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great updates!! I get it now! Thanks for the explanations! ^__^
I wonder what will happen to those two now?? Will they find a way to get out of there so they can go see their Father?
...and even if they do find him, there's no guaranties that their He'll actually want to turn Drake right? >>
Man, sorry for my questions ;; U don't have to answer them! lol
I just have to wait an see how things will go!
Anyways, thanks alot for the updates! I loved it all! *hugs*
I wonder what will happen to those two now?? Will they find a way to get out of there so they can go see their Father?
...and even if they do find him, there's no guaranties that their He'll actually want to turn Drake right? >>
Man, sorry for my questions ;; U don't have to answer them! lol
I just have to wait an see how things will go!
Anyways, thanks alot for the updates! I loved it all! *hugs*
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vampires stories are not usually my thing but this is very well done. Excellent writing, strong characters, and not your typical vampire plot. Quite intriguing...can't wait to see where you take this one.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story! please update soon!!! will someone notice that drake is missing? and who is the vampire?
ASOTA
ASOTA