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Really cool story. Love the plot. Update soon please! :)

The plot thickens. It's so obvious that Dante is jealous of Lydon. I can't believe he doesn't remember AND he's getting married to that wench Sheila. No wonder Taree is so upset after he took her virginity. After this chapter I still prefer Lydon; he seems really sweet whereas whilst Dante's behaviour is making more sense he still hasn't done anything to redeem his mean behaviour yet.

There's something really sad and sweet in that Taree is so desperate for any affection from Dante. It made her letting the events that night get out of control more believable because unlike Dante she didn't have the drunk excuse.

Did Taree think about getting some birth control after what happened? She seems like a sensible girl so I'm surprised it hasn't entered her mind yet. I know there's going to be angst but please don't go down the route of "I'm secretly having my brother's baby".

This is a great story and you are a great writer. :) Please update soon.

Oh my, the plot thickens!

I was surprised to see a sex scene so early in this story, but seeing as you have plans with it (and I see them applied in the latest chapter) it seems quite suitable. I love Taree's character so much. I feel sorry about the whole ordeal with her brother brother. You can tell Dante has some inner conflicts between his emotions for his sister. I have a feeling he is mean to her, because secretly he holds some feelings for. When he was drunk, it was possible that these harbored feelings just cut loose in that moment. I was a bit surprised that Taree did nothing to stop him though. Not a very fond memory of your first time.

As for Lydon--I like his character. He seems like a nice guy, however I have a sinking feeling that this may warp a bit. I can sense a lot of tension in upcoming chapters between the two men and Taree. Poor Taree, having to suffer hearing the news of her step-brother's marriage to that bitch; and the night after the whole incident between her and her brother too.

I'm looking forward to more. Your writing and the plot of this story has really got me hooked.
Update soon!

hi, i love the story concept, can't wait to read more, keep updating and if u wouldn't mind, could u email me when u update? i'd appreciateit. thanks =)

I really like your story and think that your writing style is excellent. I was wondering if you are still considering the M/M/F. If so who would be in it? I don't know but I really like it when the hero is extremely possessive of the heroine and I think that a group scene could ruin that. I don;t know though you could probably pull that off or you may not be going for a possessive male lead. By the way I love the length of your chapters it makes me so happy.

Since they are not blood related...could he have been falling for her all of these years. Cool story...they could keep a secret relationship...OOOOO Please update soon.

Hey! Great chapter!! I really like your characters. I'm curious as to see how Dante's going to react in morning after OR when he finds our that Taree is going out with Lyndon. OH the drama! Love it!! Dante is a jerk though but it's because he wants Taree...makes sense. Update soon!!

This is looking real good
Please update soon !!!

Hi! just found this story it is good. Pleas update soon.

Woah...I wasn't expecting that already. The whole chapter was really well-written; I liked how you switched between their different viewpoints in this chapter as it set the mood and scene very well with very little dialogue.

His thoughts in this chapter along with his behaviour here and in other chapters make more sense now. Has he been fighting his feelings for her all the time? Can't wait to see if he rememmbers in the morning or if Taree ends up telling him? The two of them alone in the house together is going to be so awkward now. Great chapter. Please update soon.