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You should have let Tar end up in the hospital...that would have made Dante really mad especially if he found out Shelia didn't give him the message. Shelia is an evil woman. I hope Dante find out she had to walk home after she called twenty times. And I hope he realizes it was Tar he slept with that's the reason why Shelia isn't turning him on anymore. Please update soon. This is the best story ever.

I love your writing. It's brilliant the way you wrote the distinctly unsexy almost sex in this chapter compared to the sensuality of the scene between Taree and Dante earlier.

I hope Dante sees the light regarding Sheila soon. I don't understand why he's even considering marrying her when he doesn't even seem to like her that much. Poor Taree. Dante had better find out somehow about Sheila's lie and kick her to the curb. It also seems like Sheila is a bit threatened by Taree although she doen't realise it.

I love the length of your chapters. Hope you get a chance to update soon.

You have to update soon!! This is the best damn "incest" story i have ever read!!!

I wouldnt consider a stepbrother not blood related incest, but it's still hot :D

Please update soon!!!!!

-CelticKnot-

Just found this story - and read all 4 chapters. I'm hooked! I hope you update soon, this story is awesome!

Dont keep us waiting TOO long!!

Sara

I love it so far. Please write more!

I just knew you were going to let him remember. I can't believe he actually asked Shelia to marry him. Tar is so upset that he didn't remember...I mean he did take her virginity. It was obvious she was jealous of Shelia and He was jealous of Lyndon. I hope you let him remember at the surprise party...while he's sober and he doesn't hate her...This is a really good story, please update soon.

I would be very upset if i lost my virginity and the person who took it, didn't remember. I know there had to be blood on his bed or something to give him a hint as to what happened that night.

Loving it, please update soon , i need more !!!!!!

What??!!?? Dante getting married? This just got a bit more complicated. I was not expecting that at all. Sigh. You need to update soon! Ps. I love that Lyndon was being really sweet. For some reason I really love his character. He sounds like a good guy BUT I still love Dante as well. So maybe you need to write in another chick for Lyndon lol! Just kidding, it's your fic...but I love happy endings!!

Things are really getting interesting….
I hope Dante soon finds out how he slept with. Keep the good work up I can hardly wait for next chapter