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for Knowing You

by LadyKyou

person calemzoe
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so Dante pissed me off in that chapter. I think I'm voting for Taree and Lydon for now. I've been enjoying reading about the realationship between Dante and Taree (of course he's been treating her abominably) more so I think for the tension. It would suck to have Dante 'suffering' for so many years with his unknown feelings for his step-sis and then not get her in the end. But Lydon is so sweet...if he doesn't end up with Taree, maybe he could start something with Joey or someone else. I'd hate to leave him hanging. Can't wait for the next chapter now, with this 'cliffhanger' and all!
person calemzoe
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story. I am totally intrigued by Taree and Dante's relationship, and I cannot wait to read more. And, BTW, I just registered on this site so that I could tell you that! Please don't wait too long to update!! ;0
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG.... please UPDATE SOOOOONNN
I NEED 2 SEE WHAT HAPPENS !!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So happy you updated, and also happy that this isn't a threesome, it didn't seem like something these people would do (Dante seems far too possesive to have a guy sleep with Taree while he is with her). Can't wait for the next chapter hope Taree knocks Dante out.
person sap
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you've got something here. I like how you really bring out the sadness and longing in Taree and Dante when they remember their old friendship. That comes across so vividly. Their relationship has a lot of ups and downs like any other, and that makes them more interesting and real to the reader. In fact, after that night with Dante the story feels much more realistic. I'm really interested to see what happens. Keep on writing. :D
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh wow, more please soon, thx for updating, does dante know about sheila?
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is becoming one of my favorite stories ever!!! I love the way you put such emotion and feeling into your characters. Cant wait to read more!! Please update soon.

Thanks!!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay, so when i wrote my last review i was tired and only had enough energy to tell you just how awesome i thought your story was. now, however, i am more awake and just wanted to tell you what i couldn't put into words last time. the reason i found your story so amazing was in part because of the twists and turns in the plot line. i love stuff like that. stories that keep you guessing and aren't completely predictable. and yours is definitely neither. plus i love your characters. they seem real. and human. really human :-), which is completely refreshing. so keep up the good work.

cheers.

sincerely
felicity
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw, wish there was more of course, but thx for updating, can't wait for next
person borntodance
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi! i like your story. she's gonna end up with dante right? i mean, i like them together. even though dante's being an ass to her. please update. thanks.