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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sat down and read all of this story so far...I really like it....I hope you continue it because i cant wait to see what happens...keep up the great work
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY u updated.. im sooooo happy ? next chapter please :):)
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing.. can't wait :D
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG
I absolutely loved your story, please write more! A lot of the authors on this site tend to take anywhere from weeks to months to update just one chapter. Dx
I loved the characters you made up to, although I'll have to admit I was hoping there would be a scene were Sheila gets severely beaten up. xD
Anyways good luck with writing and I am definitely waiting for more from this story. <3
-Justine
I absolutely loved your story, please write more! A lot of the authors on this site tend to take anywhere from weeks to months to update just one chapter. Dx
I loved the characters you made up to, although I'll have to admit I was hoping there would be a scene were Sheila gets severely beaten up. xD
Anyways good luck with writing and I am definitely waiting for more from this story. <3
-Justine
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
where are you????
come back and update PLEASEEEEEEEEE
come back and update PLEASEEEEEEEEE
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to be doing any other works along these lines- that is, more focused on plot and characters than smut? I'm really picky about what I really get into, and I have to admit I'm a bit addicted (couldn't remember the name of the story so i dug through a few pages of results to find this again), so immense kudos to your writing.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Is it a bad thing if I say that I'm totally in love with this story!!!! I hope it has a happy ending eventually!!!! Keep up the great work !!!! Please update soon!!!!!! ^_^
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am dying over here!! I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Taree coming back. Especially Dante! You need to update this asap!! Lol, I know, I'm demanding...
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to express how much I hated this chapter. The more I read the madder I got. Taree needs to have her teeth knocked out for behaving like she has. 7 years without any contact with her family? She's a coward and a weakling that acted like an immature brat. She did everything right in my book up to the night she left town. How she handled that night...I can't even begin to express how rediculous she was. She acted like an immature brat that wasn't getting her way. I don't feel the list bit sorry for her in the least.
It was cruel of her to tell them she was pregnant when she planned on leaving town right after. Last chapter seemed like she would keep contact but to go 7 years without confronting your mistakes...What was the point? What had her parents done to her? Dante I can somewhat understand but that was still cruel. And since that didn't seem to be enough she decides to out herself and Dante having sex. Just to get back at him and to try and get her parents mad at him. She did it for spite and she was no different than Sheila was and that's bad.
Yeah, I'm really starting to dislike Taree, alot. She's neck and neck with Dante for redemption if not more so. At least Dante didn't run away like a coward when the going got tough he's faced his problems. In this latest chapter Taree will need to earn my likeness back and Dante has actually gained some of my likeness. If he hits her in the next chapter I won't feel bad for her.
I'm glad Dante and Sheila aren't together anymore and she's shit anyway for giving up her child but Dante has earned me a lot of respect for taking care of his son and doing what's right. Now I'm not saying that Dante and the parents are in the right for not trying to contact or find Taree. They should've tried to get in touch with her as well when Dante and Sheila had their son and the divorce and all that.
It's good to see Joey and Lydon together, funny how that works. He didn't want her at the start and now they're having children together! Sweet!
It's good that Kale is still in Taree's life for their daughters sake. Can't believe they haven't at least tried a relationship. Most relationships only last when you've built a relationship on mutual respect which they seem to have.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Let me clairfy myself on my first expression of the chapter. I didn't hate it I loved it I just didn't like how things have turned out so far. It was well written and full of twist and turns which I love but you've done a great job on bringing the characters to life and I love that. It's easy to love a character in writing but it's harder to get people to hate them.
It was cruel of her to tell them she was pregnant when she planned on leaving town right after. Last chapter seemed like she would keep contact but to go 7 years without confronting your mistakes...What was the point? What had her parents done to her? Dante I can somewhat understand but that was still cruel. And since that didn't seem to be enough she decides to out herself and Dante having sex. Just to get back at him and to try and get her parents mad at him. She did it for spite and she was no different than Sheila was and that's bad.
Yeah, I'm really starting to dislike Taree, alot. She's neck and neck with Dante for redemption if not more so. At least Dante didn't run away like a coward when the going got tough he's faced his problems. In this latest chapter Taree will need to earn my likeness back and Dante has actually gained some of my likeness. If he hits her in the next chapter I won't feel bad for her.
I'm glad Dante and Sheila aren't together anymore and she's shit anyway for giving up her child but Dante has earned me a lot of respect for taking care of his son and doing what's right. Now I'm not saying that Dante and the parents are in the right for not trying to contact or find Taree. They should've tried to get in touch with her as well when Dante and Sheila had their son and the divorce and all that.
It's good to see Joey and Lydon together, funny how that works. He didn't want her at the start and now they're having children together! Sweet!
It's good that Kale is still in Taree's life for their daughters sake. Can't believe they haven't at least tried a relationship. Most relationships only last when you've built a relationship on mutual respect which they seem to have.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Let me clairfy myself on my first expression of the chapter. I didn't hate it I loved it I just didn't like how things have turned out so far. It was well written and full of twist and turns which I love but you've done a great job on bringing the characters to life and I love that. It's easy to love a character in writing but it's harder to get people to hate them.
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know the movie...It was called John Q and it was very good. This chapter update is very good as well. I wonder how Dante is going to react when he sees Taree again. I wonder how he's going to feel when he realizes he did sleep with her while drunk. He is already hurting because his son is sick can you imagine if it turns out the only bone marrow donor is Taree's daughter who ends up being his daugther too. That would be like a punch in the gut with a metal baseball bat. His son is sick, he just found out he slept with his sister in a drunken stupor and then he beat the crap out of her. Could his life get any worse...that is if that is the route your going to take. I still hope they end up together. He has to admit he loves her some time...we all know he does. And she loves him too. And I love this story. Great job!