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You know, I can really see this turning into a threesome... or maybe that's just my view of things. Leon certainly is interesting, as he doesn't see Shuey as an outcast. Although from her prespective one would think that ramming a knife into someone's arm was considered the proper way to handle those kinds of situations. I like how she thinks so little of Jerrick and Leon, and all things considerings it's easy to see why. I think Shuey should come with her own warning label, like so:

Warning: user may experience death if-
1. You ask stupid, pointless, or annoying questions
2. You bluntly label her as an Angel
3. You bluntly label her as a Demon
4. You show too much interest in her
5. You pick a fight with her
6. On impluse, she decides you are too worthless for her time yet continue to be within a 10 foot radius of her personal space.
Thank you for purchasing your Demon/Angel Hybrid female. We are not responsible for defects and/or accidental death, when you clearly should have read the warning label first before purchasing you dumb***.

All in all, very nice. Keep it up.

Snidne, out!

Well, this is a little bit of comfort while I'm suffering from my illness.

I like that convention is thrown out the window- no demon hellfire and no angelic (annoying) Hallelujah singing. I also like that you've pegged Shuey's personality perfectly with how little social interaction she's had. You've rounded her out well and made her a realistic human being in her circumstances, minus the wings of course. I just hope Jerrick gets bored of trying to mold her into a trophy demon/mate/wife/whatever. She at least deserves someone a little less stalker-ish and creepy. But overall, I applaud you and love it.

Very good. I liked. *smirks* I'll keep it solemn so I don't freak you out anymore. LOL But you set up a good one here. It leaves a lot of room for edge-of-seat perching.

Oh, now this is a nice turn of events. So we have a Demon owner, an Angel bartender, and a woman of a mix of both races who'd probably kill them both if she ever got the chance. The only question would be which one first.

I like the way this story is coming out. Keep up the good work.

Snidne, out

Chapter 1

Wow! I really really like this! The half angel half demon thing is actually something a friend and I are cowriting. I'm happy to see others who have that fantasy or idea as well. You're doing a great job, hon and I'd love you to continue.
Luinil
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Chapter 2

I like Shuey's temper, and if he only knew just HOW she had been raised, Jerrick would know just why she hated and was suspiceous of all things living. Great job, hon, and keep up the awesome work! This could be epic!
Love Luinil
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If you have aol or msn, hotmail or windows live, feel free to IM me. I love meeting and making new friends who share my love of creativity. *hugs* On to chappie 3! *pushes past everyone and dives in first* Heheheheh.

Chapter 3

Oo! *squeals* She actually kinda sorta maybe was a little tiny bit nice to him! Oh, I'm excited. Yes, now I are very very uhssided!
Hehehehe.
Love Luinil
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Chapter 4

Oo yay! The wing thing again, and he saw it! I wondered when he would! Keep it up, sweet, because you're doing great.

Chapter 5

Awesome! She's like me. I won't give anything away without a fight. But that's where the similarities die. *bounces onto sofa beside you and steals your popcorn, chocolate and whatever else you might be eating* I'm an insomniac too. Bleh.

Anyway, I lovelovelovelove this story! Please update soon. *cries* I've only got one chappie left...waaaaaaaah! LOL

*hugs tight*
Love Luinil
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Damn you! Damn you and the writing that you do! Damn you for making me enjoy this story so much! (In case you were wondering, this is actually a compliment.)

I must admit to you, there are very few stories on this site I actually read. Even the few I chose to read, I don't normally read them more then once or even check back for updates. Even fewer of those stories that I do re-read and continuously keep myself up-to-date on them do I bother leaving a review. For you to have pulled a review from me like this... takes a great work that I am confident will aspire to become a story worthy of thousands of hits. I am really enjoying this story and definately look forward to seeing how it develops. You've definately got Shuey's reactions of being a 'don't-fuck-with-me' person dead on. A little unruly violence never hurt to amplify the image even further, especially to what lengths she may go to keep her 'self' hidden.