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for Within a Forest Dark

by spikeface

person Anon
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loveeeeeeee this!
please please update it soon.
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God this story is so good! Please more!
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, followed this from livejournal.
person curly809
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sad, but really good. i liked this story and i hope to see what really happens with these guys as the story progresses
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just strated it and I already find it really interesting.
person Kiira
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read your chapters today and I must say that I love it! First, I too thought that this might be a typical vampire/human fic, but I'm glad that I was proven wrong. Also I wondered how the beauty and the beast would fit into this, it is different, but now I think I understand; the talking furnitures and...hm... He must keep him in the castle and maybe I don't know... he'll manage to cure him somehow from this wolf thing?

I love your writing style too, it's very lively and and... I just love it :)

I can't wait to read more!
person Aleks
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!very captivating from the beginning.....I hope for more information next time :)
person miles
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a very intense chapter !!
Perhaps Santo think he is not going to be alone anymore !?
I know, he's the bad guy here !!
Well, wait for the next chapter...
person HannaFO
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Bello!!! Have to stay in that house getting rapped and almost killed. And it's gonna happen again!?
Damn i hope he gets out... no wait maybe i don't heh :D
Great updates!!
person womo
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:( poor bello.

great story, nonetheless. I like your rendition of the beauty/beast thing. i wonder what bello is, if he isn't human.

this story rocks! the descriptions are so good, the writing is overall good- there's a pedestal in progress in my mind with your name on it.

i like your take on the vampires too! they seem more like a group of weak junkies to me, from this story. i can't wait to see what happens next! great job!

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