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for Within a Forest Dark

by spikeface

schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My, oh my, poor Bello. It's been rough on him since his capture by the vamps AND by Santo, but I do believe that he may learn more with his time with Santo than his 22(if I recall right) years of life.

I must admit, I always wondered *why* the vamps hissed. It was obvious to me that it could be a sign of communication since they aren't as stupid as Bello thinks, AND they ARE able to communicate with each other. Mind Reading Power...how interesting...but not good news for Bello, ne?

I'm glad you chose to continue this story and I am not disappointed at all with it. Good job so far. I must admit, I do try to review every story I read and apply a good review that may be helpful and/or spur you to write more. I know good reviews are like gasoline to a car...they get ya going places.

So, if my reviews seem meager, I'm sorry. I do try to put as much thought as I can. I take more than a few minutes to write a review, but at least I don't just briefly say: "so good update more!" Granted, that's better than nothing...but...still.

I also have a few theories on what Santo's work could be, but I won't say it. I'd rather not spoil it for another who may actually read my review.

Ciao for now.
person Saminada
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!! This really is one of the best story I've EVER read!!! X____X
It' just too good to be real! LMAO Muahahahahaha!!!!!

I'm glad to found out more about those two!
I wonder what will happen to Bello next?? ...The poor guy...*sniff*
Man! Santo's really something! X____X I can't believe he can read pll's mind! >< Bello's in trouble! LOL

I can't wait to read more of this! It's such a fantastic story! n___n
Thanks for the update! *hugs*
person Carmen
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! Definitely looking forward to more... update again soon!
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your writing is really incredible, i feel so drawn into the story. santo scares the crap out of me in a different way during every chapter. i love how he's sexy, creepy, scary, enthralling, irritating, and alluring all at once. i'm feeling so bad for bello- was worried he might have suicidal thoughts after his ordeal. :/ christ, that was brutal. i can't wait for more. bravo!
person oo
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for more!
so, Maybe bellos a wizard?...question is. what is bello and whats his family past.
and who cursed santo if he was once human.is it like, bad comes with the good, hes a wizard but because of that it has bad side effects?
so in the big window room, i pictured bell in her yellow gown and the beast dancing in the ball room in batb and couldnt help but think of bello and santo soon to be dancing.and of course all the moving dinner ware cheering them on.. funny picture eh?..almost creey tho.
hopefully theyll be happy someday... if even if thats what your planning..i dont know. all i know is this story is kicking ass and im into it.
fantastic tale.
hoping for tons more updates, good luck with the writing and also i adore your merman story. your a good story writer.
person mystic87
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really interesting take on Beauty and the Beast. I found this story through your "Dreaded Creatures Glide" story and thought I'd give it a try! I'm glad I did. It's very good and very exciting! Poor Bello! I would very much enjoy an update! Great first couple of chapters!
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice...Pls continue the story...it's sad and dark, but nevertheless I like it...Although they are in a bit of a bad spot,aren't they? Poor guys...Anywho, pls update soon...want to see the continuation.
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow!! i think i like this one even more than your merman story ( is that even possible?).. maybe because i have a thing for vampires/werevolves and vampire hunters..*giggle*

i love everything about this. right to the unusual name of your hero, to the villain(?) Santo. the talking mirror was creepy but it fits the whole surreal feel of this fic.

you HAVE to update as quickly as possible.. i am hanging on a thread here!!!
person oo
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
watched beauty and beast with my neice today and i cant wait to see what you do with this story, and what other b and b elments you put into it.
person Tipsy_Armadillo
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is quickly becoming one of my favorite original stories. I can totally sympathize with your characters and I love how you based it on Beauty and the Beast but didn't copy the storyline and the script. Lovin' it.
This story is fantastic. Can't wait to read more. XD