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bello is such an arrogant asshole. dammmmnnn! give the poor guy a break, i mean. great chapter!

i mean- santo...not bello!! gah. got the name mixed up. but when you think about it, they both have cocky attitudes, to some degree- but santo more so than bello.

"I waited, but Santo said nothing. He just gripped the harp and stared into the distance, like this was some soap opera and he was its tortured protagonist. Cry me a river."
LOL!! totally one of the best descriptions in this chapter!!!


they are like two kids who just can't get along. all the fighting is getting kinda funny, even if it's not supposed to be. i mean- bello lashes out at santo, santo gets hurt, santo lashes out at bello, bello gets hurt. i hope this pattern changes soon...so they can get lovey-dovey!! ooohh...ahh....

anyway, another great chapter!! your descriptions are overwhelmingly good. especially the fight scene. i gather it must be difficult trying to describe pain in so many ways, yet still make it interesting. good work!

Wonderful story. It made me laugh and it was definitely an adrenaline rush. Even in the more 'relaxed' moments the tension is still palpable. I spend all the read wondering, what will happen next. The whats, whys and wherefores. Part of me wants to know, but then another part of me lives for the longing of finding out.

Yesss !!! A new chapter ! That was fast !
Amazing chapter, really... And your writing is so good !
Thank you for sharing... I want to know what bello is !

oh man... poor bello!! i love his character.. he's so... real. and santo.. well.. i dont know what to say about him lol.

i just am ADDICTED to your story. its bloody brilliant and i hope you see it through. its rare to find good orginial fics like this one. please update soon, i am looking fwd to it.

Very intriguing. Really looking forward to the next enlightening chapter... 'Purr

God, I don't see how Belle could take this over and over. I'd just want to die!

Mmmm... oh, the blood. And I must say, the thought of Bello becoming a coffee table made me laugh. But the blood. Keep the blood coming! And update soon, please!

I had been waiting for an update to this and I was glad when I saw it! Your characters interest me and I just want to learn more about them, especially Santo.

I wonder what it means when he said that the next time would be better, or is it only if Bello partly accepts his fate? I really don't see him doing so quite so fast. I also wonder about Bello's past, does he remember all of it? His childhood for example, perhaps there's an explanation to his healing abilities?

I also started to wonder if we will see Luis later, it might be interesting...

Anyway, I do enjoy this story, soo many questions; I can't wait to read more and get answers ^__^