rate_review Reviews

I liked this fic so much I have it bookmarked!!! I usually don't do that but I just gotta find out what the heck is happening to Bello. Strange and spooky little world you created there. I was kind of freaked out that all the furniture seems to be, ahem, were once people. Kind of leaves a icy shiver down your spine.

As for the situation between the beast and Bello, now this may sound weird, I'm glad that you are taking the time to show that there are consequences of that kind of horribleousness (don't think that's a real word, but eh.) Too many story, fanfics as well as OC have something just as bad happen between their characters and then the next thing you see the happy ending. This shows that you care for your characters and they are individuals with emotional ranges that bring them to life for your reader off the computer screen.

Thanks for writing a great story.

Now...what they hell is that cliffie about!!!! GAH!!

*Muah* Kiix

Oh dear... plz don't hate me for what I'm about to do but Pllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon! *goes hide behind her couch* LOL

You can't blame me, this is the most fantastic story EVER!!! ...You don't want to know how many times I've read those five chapters or else u might thing I'm a bit OFF! Muahaha!!! *dies* ;/

Anyways, sorry for bothering u! *sights*

Wow! The first thing I gotta say is that it took me a week to recover from reading this, heh, it was that enthralling! Seriously, as soon as I finished chapter five my whole body just crashed- I was kept that on edge the entire time. I mean, holy shit, this completely blows every other kindap+rape story outta the water, heh, and I get what you mean when you say this can't end well! Bello (another FANTASTIC name, btw) is so tough and fierce and *truly* proud! It's not the arrogance or pretend-pride most other guys in stories like these tend to have, a false pride where they're not actually sure of themselves, but Bello, man, Bello... I don't know if I can compeltely describe it! He's got that perfect self-confidence and surity of a man who's never encountered anything he couldn't handle before. I mean, even when he was caught by the vampires all he did was plan out how he was going to kill them! How unnerving it must have been to suddenly meet something bigger, badder, and that doesn't even play by the same rules as *anything* else he's ever met! Wow, wow, wow- everything this guy feels is just so tangible, so *well done* that I still find myself gasping at the thought of reading it again! That's for another day though, when I have a store of energy built up and I'm capable of rational thought again, heh, wow though.

Everything about this story is just so well done! His capture, the mystery surrounding Santos, Bello's character- it's all so concise and persistent throughout! And the scenes where he attacks/kills Santos! Holy shit! Here he is, a vampire killing machine, practically born with a blade in his hand, slaughtering his captor the first chance he gets, and what happens? Santos ressurcts himself and comes back bigger and badder than ever! Haha, wow. And with the hate, the (incredibly realistic, in my opinion) lack of attraction, Bello's pride and righteous anger, I can't wait to see how this ends. Everything about this story challanges the normal "raped until love forms" storyline that I am just desperate to see what happens next!

oh wow, while cooking dinner i just discovered on a disney princess noddle box that belles name means beautiful. i never knew that!
man, can you believe how crazy little girls are over that disney princess stuff. my niece just got a princess fishing pole. god, anything they can turn into princess, they are doing it.
anyways... whats bellos name mean?
well, ill be waiting eagerly for an update!

I check for updates to this story every day. I'm addicted!

kinda has a beauty and the beast and 30 days of night thing goin on.
i like it!

Amazing work once again! I'm feeling so sorry for Bello, anyone would be terrified. Now, if he was human, he would have been killed by Santo's attack. I'm really interested to find out what Bello is.

So it seems impossible for Bello to get out of the place, so I suppose he just has to submit to make it easier on himself, but can he? And can Santo change for better if Bello would start feeling for him? (thinking beauty and the beast)

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter :)

My God. Talk about intense. Keep it up, I can't wait to find out what's going to happen.

Man, I could say this a thousand time if you want, YOUR STORY'S AWESOME!!!!!! XDD :D
It's perfect! I Love EVERYTHING!!! The way it's written, their interaction with each other, the description of Bello's terrible pain, the hatred and helplessness Bello feels and finally, the length of the chapters!!! And I'm sure I could go on and find other things, but that pretty much sums it up right??! *grins* I'm so glad that you have 'a bit of a hight' with this story, 'cause so am I!!! Muahahahahaha!!!!! :D X3

Thanks you sooooooooooo much for the fantastic story! I can't wait t read more! ^________^ *hugs*

this so bloody twisted...
i love it.