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Yesssssssss an update!!! I'm sooo HAPPY!!! :D XD

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed earlier! >> Anyways, I loved the new chappie!

The part with the love struck Vamp was soooo Funny! Muahahaha!!! It's sad that Bello left him tho! He was so cute! hihi

It must be so hard for Bello to live while everybody thinks he's dead... It's not like he could say his real name to the police and all... I can't imagine what would happened if they found out about him... *sights*

The update was awesome! Like all the others! LOL

I can't wait to know more about Romeon! How can he possibly help Bello?? Can he be trusted??? hummm

Anyways, thanks alot for the update! I'll be waiting for more! *grins*

I squealed when I saw the update. I don't squeal. It was most perturbing. Anyway, I have to say I'm incredibly attached to Bello. He's just so full of spunk. I had to backtrack a couple of times whilst reading this chapter in order to recall who some of the names you mentioned pertained to, but that was hardly a hardship. The plot is becoming an increasingly convoluted knot and I look forward to finding out how you unravel it. The tension in this story constantly cranks higher and the way you write embeds me in Bello's head; just where I want to be when I’m reading.

yay an update. Thanks, I love this story.

Wow. I've been longing for an update on this one. Is one of my favorite stories, is what it is. Can't wait to see what happens next X)

I took the liberty of following a review you had left on another story to your profile, to your LJ. I couldn't comment there, as I do not have an LJ, but I'm so pleased to hear that you are not done with this story. There are a handful, (one hand, really!) on this site that I think are fantastic - to the point that they shouldn't be here, they should be published. And, since, in your profile, you encourage readers to contact the author of another story, in order to ask her to continue, I hoped you wouldn't mind me doing the same to you.

It's such a fine piece of work. I really hope you don't give it up. It's been so long that I've stopped looking for updates, but I wanted to let you know that this story has not left my thoughts. It's that good.

I'm just loving this story so much. The characters are really well developed and interesting, and you write really well. I can't wait to see what happens next ... please update soon!

holy crap that was a good chapter. i can't wait to see where the protal takes him. he still has that collar on though...
heehee...

i like how he's intelligent about things. not stupid or ridiculously oblivious to the things going on around him. it makes him much more interesting.

great chapter!

Wow. This story is absolutely amazing! Can't wait to read more of it ^-^

Oh wow that was great, I can't belive you stoped there!!!

This is one of the most brilliant things I've read here in recent memory. Bello's internal dialogue is so gut-wrenchingly real. I love his fierce, stubborn personality, it makes his helplessness much more gripping. And Santo, what a fantastic antagonist! The way he goes from attempting to be kind to his sudden flashes of impatience make it clear that he's not used to dealing with people, which is what one would expect. It adds depth beyond the usual kidnapping monster model, and makes even his moments of tenderness seem a little sinister.

I'm also enjoying the nods to "Beauty and the Beast." I find the frequent references to Bello as his "guest" very amusing, and of course, then the song starts running through my head.

I can't believe I've missed this before now, but it was delicious to settle in and have six chapters to read at once. And I'll join the chorus of those that hope you update soon