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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my obligatory "I love this fic so much, Please update SOON!"
I like how you don't reveal that much about the characters. I really like Santo. I'd like santo and bello to come to some sort of resolution.
I like how you don't reveal that much about the characters. I really like Santo. I'd like santo and bello to come to some sort of resolution.
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i don't get this story.
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story, I absolutely love it and I cannot wait for an update! So please do it soon!
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more of this!
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I love Bello's spunk and Santo's clumsy attempts at uh... seduction? Beauty and the Beast has always been my favorite fairy tale. I love how you've been able to transform it into something completely different, while at the same time respecting the original idea. You've turned it into something so much more gritty. It never even occurred to me that it's one of the original stockholm syndrome stories until I started reading your version earlier today. I enjoy how you have pointed out how horrifying the captivity of the "Belle" character would be and haven't turned it into a sappy love story. You keep me guessing, and I can not wait for more!
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! this story's really picking up so fast! I had no idea that Bello was actually going to make it through the portal! these latest chapters, the ones that really set the tone for what Bello is up against, are just unbelievably fascinating!
so yeah, like I said, I'm really digging the way you're expanding upon this world with only tantalizing tidbits, hinting at some things and still leaving others (such as what the hell Bello is) almost completely untouched. And the action in this one was so exciting! I mean, it was thrilling before when Bello totally wiped the floor with Santo the first time (however unfortunate that turned out to be later), heh, but this time he leads a bunch of stupid vampires in front of a subway train! haha! it's fantastic! I guess if I had one criticism of this chapter it would be that Bello turning around in surprise to see that the vampires actually did follow him only to be hit by the train was a little unclear. like, at first I thought that *Bello* was the one who had gotten hit, but then I blinked and was like "oooh, the vamps were hit- but why did they try to follow him?"
you know, because Bello was confused too, so since he didn't seem to get what was going on, I didn't either, but it was more sort of like a "wait, what?" rather than "hmm, most curious" kinda thing, ya know? Because I didn't get what Bello worked out in his own head- like if the collar (or his blood) has some strange pull over the vampires, or if he figured that they actually were dumb enough to try to make it too or something.
that's really the only place I thought could use any improvement, heh, and that's just if you ever are looking for anything that could be tweaked! you know, just trying to be helpful and all that, you don't have to actually listen to anything I say or anything. moving right along though, like I said before, I'm loving all the characters that are being introduced in this chapter! especially the shy vampire scholar in the bar! he came across as so personable that I was immediately rather attached to him! gosh, I sure hope that Santo or Benedict don't get a hold of him for any reason, heh, poor guy. the whole bit where he gets kidna loopy and declares his love for Bello at the end of their little scene there kinda sealed the deal for me. guy's a total cutie, heh, shame he had to run into someone as hard as Bello!
gosh, there were so many parts of that bar scene that just rocked my world. the little bits that really flushed out how Bello thought, and why he feels the way he does about vampires. immediately rushing off to start some clashes between the vampire gangs, ready and willing to use underhanded means to get his way. the little bits where he's already learning to recognize when vampires are trying to communicate telepathically, and the stuff about how he only feels irritation when they try to drink his blood! so exciting!
yeah, perked me right up outta my seat and made me sit forward and all that as I read this. a great update, really fun and exciting chapter, I hope you're able to get the inspiration and time and write out the next one soon!
so yeah, like I said, I'm really digging the way you're expanding upon this world with only tantalizing tidbits, hinting at some things and still leaving others (such as what the hell Bello is) almost completely untouched. And the action in this one was so exciting! I mean, it was thrilling before when Bello totally wiped the floor with Santo the first time (however unfortunate that turned out to be later), heh, but this time he leads a bunch of stupid vampires in front of a subway train! haha! it's fantastic! I guess if I had one criticism of this chapter it would be that Bello turning around in surprise to see that the vampires actually did follow him only to be hit by the train was a little unclear. like, at first I thought that *Bello* was the one who had gotten hit, but then I blinked and was like "oooh, the vamps were hit- but why did they try to follow him?"
you know, because Bello was confused too, so since he didn't seem to get what was going on, I didn't either, but it was more sort of like a "wait, what?" rather than "hmm, most curious" kinda thing, ya know? Because I didn't get what Bello worked out in his own head- like if the collar (or his blood) has some strange pull over the vampires, or if he figured that they actually were dumb enough to try to make it too or something.
that's really the only place I thought could use any improvement, heh, and that's just if you ever are looking for anything that could be tweaked! you know, just trying to be helpful and all that, you don't have to actually listen to anything I say or anything. moving right along though, like I said before, I'm loving all the characters that are being introduced in this chapter! especially the shy vampire scholar in the bar! he came across as so personable that I was immediately rather attached to him! gosh, I sure hope that Santo or Benedict don't get a hold of him for any reason, heh, poor guy. the whole bit where he gets kidna loopy and declares his love for Bello at the end of their little scene there kinda sealed the deal for me. guy's a total cutie, heh, shame he had to run into someone as hard as Bello!
gosh, there were so many parts of that bar scene that just rocked my world. the little bits that really flushed out how Bello thought, and why he feels the way he does about vampires. immediately rushing off to start some clashes between the vampire gangs, ready and willing to use underhanded means to get his way. the little bits where he's already learning to recognize when vampires are trying to communicate telepathically, and the stuff about how he only feels irritation when they try to drink his blood! so exciting!
yeah, perked me right up outta my seat and made me sit forward and all that as I read this. a great update, really fun and exciting chapter, I hope you're able to get the inspiration and time and write out the next one soon!
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT STORY! Started reading it on a whim and I blew through it in a few hours, and let me tell you, its been quite enchanting! Excellent plot, characters and use of the craft of writing! Ive thoroughly enjoyed it thus far, and hope to read more!
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello there,
I just wanna say that last night I was looking for a interesting story to read a little and then get to sleep! It's morning and I'm still reading! :D no sleep at all! :P
You really amazed me! The idea of Beauty and the Beast and turning it to a whole new story and environment, ... That's a big WOW!!! :O
I mean I can see that you put a lot of thinking, for every detail! That's brilliant! ;)
and the chapters are really long! not that I'm complaining! I absolutely love them!
I think this has become one of my favorite fictions, ever!
and I do hope you intend to be loyal to the story to the end! Well I better go and read the rest! I'll be back when I finished it!
Just please update soon!!! (puppy eyes, begging) ;)
I just wanna say that last night I was looking for a interesting story to read a little and then get to sleep! It's morning and I'm still reading! :D no sleep at all! :P
You really amazed me! The idea of Beauty and the Beast and turning it to a whole new story and environment, ... That's a big WOW!!! :O
I mean I can see that you put a lot of thinking, for every detail! That's brilliant! ;)
and the chapters are really long! not that I'm complaining! I absolutely love them!
I think this has become one of my favorite fictions, ever!
and I do hope you intend to be loyal to the story to the end! Well I better go and read the rest! I'll be back when I finished it!
Just please update soon!!! (puppy eyes, begging) ;)
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
It's me again! :D Finally finished reading! You know I hate cliff hangers! >.< Please please update soon!
OK, now I can see that it's not the beauty and the beast only but something else as well! witch makes it even more interesting! I can't tell what's to come?! Some how I had had a feeling that the beauty should in one way or another fall in love with the beast but right now, I guess not!!! O.o
Things are becoming complicated and I can't really wait to see what to come?! u.u
Ohh, one thing about the house/mansion. It pretty much remind me of Harry Potter, but not that. Some thing has confused me and it's that the very first time Bello came to this house, you were referring to it as a apartment and that the flat was in 7th store! Did I miss something?! have they moved to somewhere else or the whole apartment thing with elevator and ... was magic as well???
I really wants to know what Bello really is and how was it that he became a hunter in first place?
I think the email is gonna be hidden, so here it is, in case you feel like drop me a line! :P
roya7777 at yahoo dot ca
BTW, do you know how the reminder works here?! I'm kid of new here. abd ye I wanted to suggest that sent this wonderful magnifisent fiction of yours on "fiction area" as well. I'm sure people would love to read it there as well.
Now I'm goning to hit your LJ! :D
You find a big fan! ;)
Update, update, update! :3
It's me again! :D Finally finished reading! You know I hate cliff hangers! >.< Please please update soon!
OK, now I can see that it's not the beauty and the beast only but something else as well! witch makes it even more interesting! I can't tell what's to come?! Some how I had had a feeling that the beauty should in one way or another fall in love with the beast but right now, I guess not!!! O.o
Things are becoming complicated and I can't really wait to see what to come?! u.u
Ohh, one thing about the house/mansion. It pretty much remind me of Harry Potter, but not that. Some thing has confused me and it's that the very first time Bello came to this house, you were referring to it as a apartment and that the flat was in 7th store! Did I miss something?! have they moved to somewhere else or the whole apartment thing with elevator and ... was magic as well???
I really wants to know what Bello really is and how was it that he became a hunter in first place?
I think the email is gonna be hidden, so here it is, in case you feel like drop me a line! :P
roya7777 at yahoo dot ca
BTW, do you know how the reminder works here?! I'm kid of new here. abd ye I wanted to suggest that sent this wonderful magnifisent fiction of yours on "fiction area" as well. I'm sure people would love to read it there as well.
Now I'm goning to hit your LJ! :D
You find a big fan! ;)
Update, update, update! :3