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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss this the first time around? I'm not sure. Update soon, please!
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know if you would continue this or not, but I'm glad you did. The weird (but good) thing is even though this is loosely based off of Beauty and the Beast, that probably wouldn't have even registered into my mind if you had not said it was. That's how different and original is. Even your vampires are different. Different is good and your story is well-written, too. The plot is developing good, too. There's a lot of mystery to it and it adds to it more when Santo gives hints/clues about himself. Well, I've been procrastinating for a exam that's tomorrow morning, so I'm going to attempt to study some...
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here I was, about to proclaim that only two very specific authors on this site were worth /anyone's/ attention, and I come upon this story. And, of course, the universe has to prove my wrong by making this piece absolutely brilliant. I don't care that it's just a first chapter/prologue at the moment-- it's lovely. I'm already in love with the main character, who seems in line with one of my favorite protagonist's ever, Harry Dresden, while at the same time he remains very unique. The style of this is already awesome with this vaguely morbid, modern day fairy tale vibe to it. Onwards and upwards, your 'stuff' is just plain /fun/ to read. I know at one point or other I've read or at least looked at your other stories, but I already want to label this as slightly superior (what can I say? I'm a sucker for vampire stories). Please please please PLEASE continue. If you're having ANY inspirational troubles, feel more than free to email me or something. I must read more of this. It's delicious.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi lambent,
This is quite excellent. I am coming to conclusion that you can't write a bad fic :) Very good start of the story and the imagery is vivid. I like the fact that each story is different and cool in its own way (and the titles). Good vamp descriptions in this one. Nice to see a departure from the typical vamp clichés.
This is quite excellent. I am coming to conclusion that you can't write a bad fic :) Very good start of the story and the imagery is vivid. I like the fact that each story is different and cool in its own way (and the titles). Good vamp descriptions in this one. Nice to see a departure from the typical vamp clichés.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far,so keep up the good work.UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far! A description of the main character would be nice. Anyway it's a really interesting spin on the typical vampire hunter theme. I can't wait to see more of them. And to find out what Santo is exactly... For some reason I think he's some kind of vampire. I really like your style of writing. It's lush and dark.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Completely enthralled. This is amazing writing. Can't wait for more!