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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Very vivid chracterisation. Clara was a fabulous way to hint at Bello's appearence. It twisted the old cliche and made me smile.
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. That was so brutal. That was actually a well written rape scene. Most people write rape like it's fun and just something you weep about and delay sex for. The throwing up and injuries and the fight just made it all the more real. I really do love this story. Thanks for writing it.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man....That must hurt like hell!!! O_____O I'm completely terrified for the poor guy! ;; he's in some shitty mess now! ><
Anyways, I really LOVE ur story! I wish I could've been able to read more and more!! :) So I really can't wait to see what's gonna happen next between those two??! XD Ur an awesome writer! I just loved it all! *hugs* Thanks! :P
Anyways, I really LOVE ur story! I wish I could've been able to read more and more!! :) So I really can't wait to see what's gonna happen next between those two??! XD Ur an awesome writer! I just loved it all! *hugs* Thanks! :P
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really amazing story! I couldn't stop reading it. Hope to learn more about Bello's abilities soon and how his interactions with Santo progress. Bello's character is really great; he's definitely not a pussy and can stand up for himself. Great writing too. Thanks for the story, hope you update soon!
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it!!! Please come back with more updates soon!!!
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is possibly the best original slash fic I've ever read. I love it to pieces!
I look forward to the next installment.
I look forward to the next installment.
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew it !! Santo is a real bastard ! Perhaps he save Bello, but he's going to torture him...
You're writing is pretty good... Update soon please...
You're writing is pretty good... Update soon please...
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me he shouldn't have done that. A fork in the eye is not a good way to thank the only reason you're alive. I'm very intrigued by this setting and the characters. Everything is so mysterious. I know Santo seems to be in lust but why is he taking so much shit from this twerp and pissing off Benedict for him? I have to keep reading.
Oh and you made a little error. When he punched the door you typed "a hand shot up his hand". I think you meant pain. Just looking out. Can't wait to read more.
Oh and you made a little error. When he punched the door you typed "a hand shot up his hand". I think you meant pain. Just looking out. Can't wait to read more.
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D Sounds like it should be fun. I'm excited to see how this will unfold. I like Bello a lot.
Fifth Circle reminds me a bit of MacAnally's (sp?) from the Dresden Files.
Fifth Circle reminds me a bit of MacAnally's (sp?) from the Dresden Files.
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!