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I like this new version way better then your first. I know it's going to be hard for her but i really hope she can forgive him, especially agter her just saved her life. update soon.

I just found this story but I am really glad I did. I love it. I don't know how you did it but I am liking Jack. How do you get someone to like a rapist?? Anyway message me when you update if possible
noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
I dont wassa miss a chapter.

Hey! Okay, lol after seeing your many requests (aka demands lol) for reviews, I thought I'd put my two cents in. I just started reading your fic and I think it's pretty good so far. I just think that Mary should be WAAAAAAAAAAAY more traumatized after what happened to her. If that had happened to me, I'd be curled up in a ball in my bedroom. I think that the very fact that She's even talking to Jack...it might be a little illogical. I would have expected her to try to get as far away from him as possible (or react as her mother did except ten times worse). I do love Sam though. He seems like a sweet guy. As for Jack saying he's in love with Mary, makes me a little suspicious or think he's totally crazy...I don't know exactly where you're going with this fic plot-wise but I think it's a good start!

Wow what a twist!!!!
update!!!

okok im gonna review ur story as u so nicely asked for it xDDD
i think its kinda good, well written and all.
I read the old version too!
why didnt u keep the idea of mary freaking out in the cafe coz she thought she heard sam's name being jack?
i have other questions concerning later chapter but i'll wait for those to come up ^-^

Good job and keep on writing >.< dont let the lack of review drag u down!! at least people are reading ur story (even if they dont write some kind word at then end)

bubye!

I too enjoyed the story and read the original. I am interested in finding out what changes you have planned for the repost. Don't stop writing this, the worst thing to leave is an unfinished story. My only critique is that you should add more dimension to your supporting characters. It will add more texture to the story to focus on the other people in your lead character's life.

pls keep writing

Nice story! I cried when Mary was raped. So sad!
I can't believe her sister would do something so horrible! What a bitch!
I want to read more :)