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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was sooo not expected, I like your story so far. I have a suggestion for you though, maybe you could post a link to this story in the first chapter of your posting in the Erotica section you should get more reviews that way
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking the story, it has a good plot. Understandably a difficult one to write. You give wonderful insight to whats going on in her brain. I don't know how I feel about her ending up with Jack, I kind of want to see her end up with someone that isn't Sam or Jack. I would be cool to see Jack in her life though, maybe as a good friend? And if there was a poll going on I say revenge on Sam for being a lying, cheating, bastard!
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that explained a lot. It's so sad for Mary I really hoped that this guy would be good for her, Oh well that might give her the push toward Jack. I really like Jack although all the raping thing ;)
I love this fic and can't wait for the continue to roll.
I love this fic and can't wait for the continue to roll.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Jack..I want her and Jack get together..OMG sam's cheating on her, she's better off without him and go with Jack..I like Jack
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I'm offically lovin this story. ^^ This is well written and flows well, I can't wait to read more. I haven't finished yet, but thought I'd give you a review now to help cheer you up. :)
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright. So I finally got the chance to sit down and read it all and I am so glad that I found the time to do so! I loved the original and I am definitely loving the rewrite. I'm not sure what it is but there is more flesh to the story and I am enjoying every word you are writing. The last part of chapter six was slightly surprising though I had a feeling that was how Jack felt. I can't wait for an update. I'm so happy about this story! Thank you for taking the time to work on it and post it again.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As much pain that jack has caused her i'm feeling really sorry for him. I want her to be happy with sam but i just don't feel like it's right. weird i know...
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...the thought plickens!
I like the three points of view that you presented in this last chapter, because you did it in such a way that I'm still not sure who I'd like Mary to end up with. When she's with Sam, I feel badly for Jack (and vice versa). Keep up the fine work :D! Cheers!
I like the three points of view that you presented in this last chapter, because you did it in such a way that I'm still not sure who I'd like Mary to end up with. When she's with Sam, I feel badly for Jack (and vice versa). Keep up the fine work :D! Cheers!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story earlier and read it in one sitting. You're got a very interesting storyline here and I can't wait to see where you take this. Cheers!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo I like the linkage at the end of the latest chapter!
I'm hooked - please update soon!!
Thanks for sharing it! :)
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I'm hooked - please update soon!!
Thanks for sharing it! :)
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xxx