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for Not The One

by sammo0101

schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok...brilliant and fantastic so far, i would love to read more.
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its a really good story! keep it up ^^
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I just sat here today and read your story. I really like it. You have had me in tears a couple times. I can't believe what a jerk Sam ended up being. I hope Billy treats her good and I am looking forward to anohter chapter.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW i love your story! Keep up the work i really like it ^^
person tata12772
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 10 chapters so far...I really like it alot...Sams an ass..Mary seems to be alot stronger than she gives herself credit for just to be able to smile and laugh considering the crap she went through...Jack well yeah Im still tryin to figure him out...I do think that Mary and the UPS guy needs to go out a few times to give her some kind of normalcy(sp?)...Keep up the great work I cant wait to read whats next
person sophie
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
I still dont like Sam
He's a jerk and bastard
I like Billy, he's a nice man
I hope that he's the one for her
Mary and Billy forever lol
Hope you update soon
person Acal
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow.. that was a really powerful chapter. I don't usually like angst but you really pulled that off! Looking forward to more!
person Tamara
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work! More! pretty please......
person AllSpark
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter can't wait for the next one. Catch you next time ;)
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. more please:)