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for The First Time

by Jmedea

person cyclones
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice, more please
person ssj4kakorot
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice first chapter, please continue
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More! Please! Now is good for an update.
person Ahya
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo! I enjoyed reading the first chapter of your story! I hope to read more soon enough! Great job!

Ah-ya