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for Conception

by MarianTheBlackadder

person KiraKira
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please! Please! finish this story I want to know what happens!! Will shay asn reaper stay toghter or will shay die? i hope she won't. I love the way to brought two differance species together. the love that shay and reaper have for each other is pricless. and the two children are so cute. so please continue this store please!!!
person angelmay
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is there a way for Shay to become immortal without becoming a vampire?I can't wait to read more.UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, I enjoy the plot. However, you should add more detail. It's hard to picture the characters in your mind if you have nothing to go on. I'm not trying to be mean, I promise. I am looking forward to your next update.