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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeep! My cherry!
Oh damn, I can't wait till it rains.
I'm so curious!
And this line: "groaning and moaning like some bad porno movie"
Is brilliant XD.
The hospital thing is also a really good idea. never thought of that.
Oh damn, I can't wait till it rains.
I'm so curious!
And this line: "groaning and moaning like some bad porno movie"
Is brilliant XD.
The hospital thing is also a really good idea. never thought of that.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i am just in lovvvvve with this story i love all things zombie and zombie like and i love slash and your story just rocks my socks :D
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
..
I'd rather not think of that...
Or maybe I would?
How is it that most zombie plagues seem to start in America anyway?
Hmm, I really hope Xander gets better soon.
I also hope they don't live in an area where the rain is seasonal, and that they'll have to wait months for the next one. *shudder*
Oh, um, and you kinda inspired me to try to write a zombie story too,
I'm not trying to rip you off, so I hope you won't mind me posting it here eventually? *twiddles thumbs*
I'd rather not think of that...
Or maybe I would?
How is it that most zombie plagues seem to start in America anyway?
Hmm, I really hope Xander gets better soon.
I also hope they don't live in an area where the rain is seasonal, and that they'll have to wait months for the next one. *shudder*
Oh, um, and you kinda inspired me to try to write a zombie story too,
I'm not trying to rip you off, so I hope you won't mind me posting it here eventually? *twiddles thumbs*
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Scary! I hope everything goes according to plan.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the new chappy.
Damn the voices thing is so intriguing, but it scares me too. It reminds me of the 'alfa' zombie in 'I am legend'. You know, the one that seemed to actually have a brain and 'led' the other zombies? I dunno, but that scared the shit out of me.
Then again he could just be going crazy, still not good but better then a thinking zombie in my opinion.
Hmmm, the shortness isn't really too bad you know, especially since it's semi journal style. I mean not may people write very long journal entries. Then again, he does have more time on his hands then usual people.
Their relationship is interesting, though I somehow can't help but wonder, if under different conditions they would still have been together.
I mean humans need contact and loving, and they are all alone, so it's logical for them to cling to each other?
Hmm, ok, enough ramble for the day :)
Damn the voices thing is so intriguing, but it scares me too. It reminds me of the 'alfa' zombie in 'I am legend'. You know, the one that seemed to actually have a brain and 'led' the other zombies? I dunno, but that scared the shit out of me.
Then again he could just be going crazy, still not good but better then a thinking zombie in my opinion.
Hmmm, the shortness isn't really too bad you know, especially since it's semi journal style. I mean not may people write very long journal entries. Then again, he does have more time on his hands then usual people.
Their relationship is interesting, though I somehow can't help but wonder, if under different conditions they would still have been together.
I mean humans need contact and loving, and they are all alone, so it's logical for them to cling to each other?
Hmm, ok, enough ramble for the day :)
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story! Very entertaining. It's not very often you see people mix slash with zombies! (Usually it's just Vampires. I mean, really, a person can only take so many Vampire stories before it just gets dumb.)
And, by the way, I thought you just might like to know.. in the description of your story, you spelled -esque wrong. (As in, 'Zombie-esc'? It's actually 'Zombie-esque.' -Esc isn't actually a suffix ^^;;) Other than that, everything is awesome! Keep it up! I'm deffinately watching this one!
And, by the way, I thought you just might like to know.. in the description of your story, you spelled -esque wrong. (As in, 'Zombie-esc'? It's actually 'Zombie-esque.' -Esc isn't actually a suffix ^^;;) Other than that, everything is awesome! Keep it up! I'm deffinately watching this one!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I'm not really sure where this story will go, but I can't say i'm not interested.
Keep it up :)
Keep it up :)
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm yay!
what a glad eve it was when I came to see more of this story.
I like it. It's a quick read, but still very interesting <3
what a glad eve it was when I came to see more of this story.
I like it. It's a quick read, but still very interesting <3
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
Zombies are allergic... TO RAIN! Well, maybe you're not going that route, but that's an interesting premise right there. Still intriguing. Hope to see more. Happy writing!
~C. Reed
Zombies are allergic... TO RAIN! Well, maybe you're not going that route, but that's an interesting premise right there. Still intriguing. Hope to see more. Happy writing!
~C. Reed
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 10
Wow Diz, you really have something going here :) Pretty good, I started reading this and had to keep going. Like the journal style; it really works. Wish we knew a bit more about the zombies. Whoever they are going to eat when there is noone left? Eerie staff.
Wow Diz, you really have something going here :) Pretty good, I started reading this and had to keep going. Like the journal style; it really works. Wish we knew a bit more about the zombies. Whoever they are going to eat when there is noone left? Eerie staff.