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Ohdang. Cliffie.
But yay! A firehose! Good thinking Xan. ^_~
ohhoho now I'm anxious to know what happens. At least he's not falling into the zombies.
And good for Siska too. The crazy lady does have a heart... maybe. \o/ *cheers*

Hehehe you wrote sex and it was good! I'm definitely enjoying this story. Lots. Sorry I haven't reviewed till now, but I was a lurker until about 2 minutes ago. You know what I thought would be cool? If Xander and Raen somehow got hold of some waterguns or something and just went and blasted the zombies. Cause they would melt, right? Unfortunately after this past chapter, I'm not so sure that Raen would have the stomach for something like that :/. Plus, where would they get water guns..? d00d, a firehose would seriously pwn those creeps. Haha, sorry, this is just me rambling. Keep up the good work!!

Oh my this was so hot!
Gah I read it twice and going for twice!
I saw some typo's, I'll be happy to pick them out for you, if you don't mind.
Haha, the flame thrower scene is quite the drama. Haru has a point with the crazy bitch. I probably couldn't tolerate myself eighter.
Interesting note is that a good friend of mine was reading along and said that she could imagine me doing that.
I quote:
"'I don’t dare go anywhere near the first level, not as long as Siska is running around', hmm sounds like a day at school" ^ ^;

I'm glad they 'made up'. I really hope Rean can stay with Xander, he's such a sweety. <3

Damn ...
I can't believe I've overlooked this so many times.
Please add more, this is really good.

hello!
Wow, hot scene there! I relieved that Xander was not murdered (hummm, I thought he would be killed by the girl... that's why I called her that!! so... ops!! Sorry about that!).
Anyway, Thank you for updating so soon and doing an excellent chapter!
Ps: Hey, I'm really sorry for calling the girl a crazy bitch! hummm, but she was crazy at first... and second time I read the story!!!

Eh?
I don't know if I love him too????
My Gosh, There is two options: The crazy bitch (sorry, but she is crazy and... kind of bitch...) and the nice guy who helped Raen when he was sick, saved his life etc, etc, etc...
Not a difficult decision!!!
Love your story and how things happen (shot and all, like a real diary but with some more information), and I love Xander!!If some day the world is infected by some crazy thing and zombies start to appear, I would want a "Xander" with me too!
Hummm, I just hope that nothing happens with Xander (I don't know why, but I was thinking that Raen will realize his love for Xander when the former dies...).
PS: sorry about my poor English, it's not my first language!

Wow, they've got guts, standing up to a psycho with a gun XD
Don't worry, I'm enjoying the ride.
It's interesting to see where you'll lead me.
I've done acting, and I have no problem seeing myself in awkward roles.
One of my favorites was where I had to act a psycho girl. Initially she seems to be a withdrawn, skittish and weak rape victim, but at the end kills her older brother in a mad killing spree.
Oh that was fun.

Ah, anyway, I talk too much.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wonder how their raid will go.

I don't know why i'm so addicted to this. haha

wondreful ooo cant wait to see who it is

Arg!
That is the evilest cliffie I've seen in a looong time.
Grrr >.<

As always, sweet update; this story just gets better and better :D
I'm really curious as to why there are so little people left. Hope we find out soon.

*shotguns cliffy*