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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Though a tad bit lost, I still liked it.
Take your time with the chapters. If you rush it when you're low on ideas it will sound bad :)
Happy writing.
Take your time with the chapters. If you rush it when you're low on ideas it will sound bad :)
Happy writing.
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy wow, interesting.
So he's conscious but not? Strange.
And damn what a conspiracy. But does that mean that the virus has been contained to one country only? And who are they waging war against?
And would the rival country not have been able to eliminate the country during the infection?
Bleh, I'm over analyzing.
Still, interesting update
So he's conscious but not? Strange.
And damn what a conspiracy. But does that mean that the virus has been contained to one country only? And who are they waging war against?
And would the rival country not have been able to eliminate the country during the infection?
Bleh, I'm over analyzing.
Still, interesting update
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great twist. Glad to know it was all a dream.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr, i am so close to sending my eyeball eating Zombie after you.
*sigh*
Well, as long as you continue it eventually, I'll relent. Don't worry I have the patience to follow stories for years. I still check back on stories that went on hiatus in 2005...
It's disappointing.
Don't disappoint me?
*puppy eyes*
The conspiracy theory has potential, but it's a tricky subject. It's easy to get cliche there. handle with care.
*sigh*
Well, as long as you continue it eventually, I'll relent. Don't worry I have the patience to follow stories for years. I still check back on stories that went on hiatus in 2005...
It's disappointing.
Don't disappoint me?
*puppy eyes*
The conspiracy theory has potential, but it's a tricky subject. It's easy to get cliche there. handle with care.
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo what happened to Raen???? x) Yeah yeah I understand that you need more time. I'm just glad this isn't the definite end since it would be nice to know what happened, though I suppose this could be one of those endings that let us use our imaginations (ihatethem) hahahaha. Well I'm glad you're getting back to K&S. Thats actually my favorite work of yours. Until next time then.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww!
Poor Raen!
POOR XANDER!
How torturous it must be for him! Eep. I'm eager to read more, so I really hope you manage to get a new pc/lappy soon. And also cause it sucks bullocks to have computer problems.
I really love this story, even though the chapters are shot they convey so much. It's brillent, and quite exciting. And it's wonderful how you always answer some questions, attend some insecurities, and then open the door to a million more!
Good luck on getting a new pc.
*huggles*
Poor Raen!
POOR XANDER!
How torturous it must be for him! Eep. I'm eager to read more, so I really hope you manage to get a new pc/lappy soon. And also cause it sucks bullocks to have computer problems.
I really love this story, even though the chapters are shot they convey so much. It's brillent, and quite exciting. And it's wonderful how you always answer some questions, attend some insecurities, and then open the door to a million more!
Good luck on getting a new pc.
*huggles*
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope it all works out :)
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Computer problems!! I know how that feels, I was without my laptop for almost half a year because I sent it in to be fixed, it came back and then malfunctioned like, two days later, so I had to send it in again. Well, I hope the problem gets resolved soon, for your sake. I go a little insane when I don't have a computer around...
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In the first paragrahp (?) I was wondering if you meant to say "somehow" instead of "someone".
He's in a coma, bring him out of it soon. The first person view in the beginning of chapter 18 was a nice touch. Thought it was a journal entry at first but I liked it. First person views always add a nice personal touch to a story. Hope your muse returns to you. Writing in a classroom always helps, but, er, is technically bad if you're supposed to be doing something. Still, add another chapter.
Oh, and yes, it grabbed my interest :)
He's in a coma, bring him out of it soon. The first person view in the beginning of chapter 18 was a nice touch. Thought it was a journal entry at first but I liked it. First person views always add a nice personal touch to a story. Hope your muse returns to you. Writing in a classroom always helps, but, er, is technically bad if you're supposed to be doing something. Still, add another chapter.
Oh, and yes, it grabbed my interest :)
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about the others, but I'm glad you write everywhere! So you are able to update faster (yeah, I'm greedy about it!! What can I say? I love reading stories!).
In this chapter you were a little evil, weren't you? It was chaotic(not the writing, but what was happening with the characters and everything) and you finished it with a big cliff! It is pure evil, but, hey, I like it!
I don't know with I read wrong, but... the zombies were melting???
Thank you for your story!
In this chapter you were a little evil, weren't you? It was chaotic(not the writing, but what was happening with the characters and everything) and you finished it with a big cliff! It is pure evil, but, hey, I like it!
I don't know with I read wrong, but... the zombies were melting???
Thank you for your story!