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July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rushed ending, but understandable.
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It got me to smile which means it was acceptable. :)
It's nice to know that even though you lost interest you still managed to finish it. I am happy that there's an ending.
That is the ending right?
Thanks for an enjoyable read. Kudos to you.
^_^
It's nice to know that even though you lost interest you still managed to finish it. I am happy that there's an ending.
That is the ending right?
Thanks for an enjoyable read. Kudos to you.
^_^
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ending...doesn't really live up to the begining of the story...maybe if you added in an epilogue (not sure if I spelled that right) of them set a few years later so as to give a better alls well that ends well (maybe give Xander a bio arm since technology is almost there in our time) ^-^ still cool story
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It didn't suck but it was abrupt. I don't know what I thought happened. I guess I thought he might have made like Alice and fell down the proverbial rabbit hole to safety. i certainly didn't expect the gruesome end that met Siska or Xander. I also wondered about what happened to the journals, did he start another or something. I did like the end though because it in its own way it was an apocalyptic happy ending.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(ish too lazy to loggeth in)
Take your time.
I can wait.
My sympathies.
Take your time.
I can wait.
My sympathies.
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah!
That was one of the worst cliff hangers I've ever experienced.
I apologize, it's a form of respect for me to call someone Mam. I respect you for your awesome writing skills .... I understand though, you're the same age as me and I twitch every time someone calls me miss or by my last name. But I guess being referred to as "hey you" would be just as bad ... ranting.
Update more please! I can't wait.
That was one of the worst cliff hangers I've ever experienced.
I apologize, it's a form of respect for me to call someone Mam. I respect you for your awesome writing skills .... I understand though, you're the same age as me and I twitch every time someone calls me miss or by my last name. But I guess being referred to as "hey you" would be just as bad ... ranting.
Update more please! I can't wait.
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo!
I´m so happy that you´re back!! But I think you´re evil because you stopped with a big cliff!?!?! It´s so cool...
About Max Brooks, I´m such a geek that as soon as I saw that book here in Brazil, I bought one (they have translated and I bought in the same week); I discovered that here in Brazil we have more chances to survive an invasion (every where that you look we have big and high walls and stuff).
Anyway, welcome back (Hehehe, I´m really happy)and, as always, great story!
Ps: have you ever seen "the walking dead" comics from robert kirkman?
I´m so happy that you´re back!! But I think you´re evil because you stopped with a big cliff!?!?! It´s so cool...
About Max Brooks, I´m such a geek that as soon as I saw that book here in Brazil, I bought one (they have translated and I bought in the same week); I discovered that here in Brazil we have more chances to survive an invasion (every where that you look we have big and high walls and stuff).
Anyway, welcome back (Hehehe, I´m really happy)and, as always, great story!
Ps: have you ever seen "the walking dead" comics from robert kirkman?
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, an update! I am so glad that you have found your writing groove! This was sweet and short! I think I know where Raen went...
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(ish too lazy to log in)
Take your time, You can't rush it or it will sound bad ^^
I shall patiently wait for the next chapter.
writing randomly on paper has always helped, but then I get called a skitso cause it looks all weird =.= Still, that's my suggestion.
Take your time, You can't rush it or it will sound bad ^^
I shall patiently wait for the next chapter.
writing randomly on paper has always helped, but then I get called a skitso cause it looks all weird =.= Still, that's my suggestion.
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The exclamation at the end of your sentence wants me to go "Yes mam!" :P
Ah, alone time. Please update soon.
I hope you get better, being sick's a bitch. Orange juice and bed rest? Get well soon.
Ah, alone time. Please update soon.
I hope you get better, being sick's a bitch. Orange juice and bed rest? Get well soon.