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for Fooling Myself

by KimBlack

person Harboe
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, no spelling or grammar mistakes (that I could find, anyway) and a plot and pacing that catches you from the first line. A very unique plot and one that's hard to pull off (I'm hoping you do, obviously). I have a minor in psychology, so I'm obviously a sucker for stuff like this ;)
person Steph
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like this story. It's very interesting, original as well. I also can't believe you hardly have any reviews! Disgusting, lol. Anyway, I hope you update soon, because this is a really, really good story. :)
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this story is quite original...especially for a fic site! I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews.

Angela has endeared herself to me already. And I can't wait to see what stunts her other personalities pull. On the technical side of things, I can't see any readily visible grammatical errors and your structure is great.

I can't wait for your next update!

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