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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
meeting the parents already? they're totally not going to understand even if she explains. hell, i wouldn't.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh!!!! I detest cliffhangers!!!! and yet...I love this story!!! You clever/cruel author! Now, I cannot rest til I find out what happens next! ;-P
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's more after this right? I mean, there's still "the accident" to find out about...and I wouldn't mind a "in-real-life" romp between them. ;-) More on the way? Yes, please!
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I totally loved that story!!! Major kudos.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One thing I don't get is why she is so afraid of the dreams or why he always looks so hurt in them, I hope you explain that soon. I like it though, and can't wait to read more.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm...is there a chapter missing between 6 and 7? I love your story, I really do but the transition was kind of akward between 6 to 7, first they were staring at each other in the MacDonald's booth but then it went to her sitting in theatre with her friend?!? Did they say anything to eachother when they were in that booth?
That was a great ending in chapter 7. I'm intrigued to know what kind of accident he was in, clearly it must have derailed his swimming career but maybe he just needs her to jump start it again. Your plot line is amazing and really unique. I can't wait until your next chapter to see what happens next!
That was a great ending in chapter 7. I'm intrigued to know what kind of accident he was in, clearly it must have derailed his swimming career but maybe he just needs her to jump start it again. Your plot line is amazing and really unique. I can't wait until your next chapter to see what happens next!
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH!!!!!!!! I can't take the suspense! X_X! They FINALLY meet! LOL <3
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow you write really interesting stories. I feel like her dreams are memories of all the past lives that she has shared with that person. I can't wait to see where you are taking this story. And she saw him in the theatre!?! Wow, I wonder if he would have recognized her....I guess soulmates recognize each other??
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting story! It's a little confusing on what's happening, if the scene is real or not, but that really helps in aiding how the story reads. Poor Tracey sounds so confused, and I really like how jagged and random her dreams are. I'm really intrigued on what's going on, not only in the dream world, but in reality too! Great story, I'm going to keep up with this one!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fascinating. I hope you update soon.