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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me thinks that Caelyn is falling in love with Daire himself. Maybe, if Aleksei thinks he has competition for his mates affections, maybe he might start making moves to keep Daire for himself?
Can't wait for Daire to come into heat. The way Aleksei is trying to resist him, I think fireworks are going to go off, and he won't know whats hit him, lol.
Just a few little typos I spotted.....
And now knowing htat (that) I have to spend the rest of my life with you makes it even more unbearable.
A few moments later, Daire appeared lead (led) by one of the other guards.
He got his change (chance) a lot sooner than he thought.
There you go. That was quite painless, wasn't it? lol...
Can't wait for Daire to come into heat. The way Aleksei is trying to resist him, I think fireworks are going to go off, and he won't know whats hit him, lol.
Just a few little typos I spotted.....
And now knowing htat (that) I have to spend the rest of my life with you makes it even more unbearable.
A few moments later, Daire appeared lead (led) by one of the other guards.
He got his change (chance) a lot sooner than he thought.
There you go. That was quite painless, wasn't it? lol...
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! I'm so happy this chapter is up! I can't wait to see what happens to Daire, I'm so worried! You're a wonderful writer by the way! Keep it up!
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
On the twins:
if both are hermaphrodites why is only one getting pregnant?
if both are hermaphrodites why is only one getting pregnant?
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say I really like your story, it's got a very interesting plot(it's different from what I normally read, but after the first chapter I'm hooked!), can't wait for more!^_^
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Three days eh? So, Aleksei can choose to make the next few days hell on earth for Daire, or he can snap out of whatever it is that's got a hold of him, and start to behave himself.
As for poor Daire, is the next three days going to feel like three years? Is he going to be crawling and crying at the door to be let out?
Can't wait to find out...
As for poor Daire, is the next three days going to feel like three years? Is he going to be crawling and crying at the door to be let out?
Can't wait to find out...
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i cant even explain how much i love this story!!!
its perfect. and i also love your writing...
i really hope youll present the next chapter through Aleksei point of you.. it will be intresting..and please keep it on Aleksei and Daire relationship. their exelent together. i love Aleksei. his character is great.
please update soon..i cant wait...
its perfect. and i also love your writing...
i really hope youll present the next chapter through Aleksei point of you.. it will be intresting..and please keep it on Aleksei and Daire relationship. their exelent together. i love Aleksei. his character is great.
please update soon..i cant wait...
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update!!! w00t Thanks!
I couldn't wait to read more of ur story! ^^
But man, I can't believe Aleksei shoved Daire like that! *sniff*
I hope he'll come to respect Daire soon! Poor guy to have a mate who can't talk to him even remotely close to nice! >_<
Anyways, I wonder how it'll go just the two of them by themselves? Are they going to talk much? or ignore each other? humm...
I can't wait to see where u'll take this story and I can't wait to read more!!! update asap pretty plz? *big puppy eyes* LOL kidding!
I couldn't wait to read more of ur story! ^^
But man, I can't believe Aleksei shoved Daire like that! *sniff*
I hope he'll come to respect Daire soon! Poor guy to have a mate who can't talk to him even remotely close to nice! >_<
Anyways, I wonder how it'll go just the two of them by themselves? Are they going to talk much? or ignore each other? humm...
I can't wait to see where u'll take this story and I can't wait to read more!!! update asap pretty plz? *big puppy eyes* LOL kidding!
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, come on. You can't stop there! What happens next?
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I loved the new chapter! Thank you so much for the update!
And, btw... I know that I have no right to go around giving advise to other authors, but please allow me to suggest that you write more interaction between the other characters... I found it a bit sad that they only talked about Aleksei and his mate... I wanna get to know them too! :(
Apart from that, your fic is getting more exciting, I can't wait to see the wedding ceremony! *___*
And, btw... I know that I have no right to go around giving advise to other authors, but please allow me to suggest that you write more interaction between the other characters... I found it a bit sad that they only talked about Aleksei and his mate... I wanna get to know them too! :(
Apart from that, your fic is getting more exciting, I can't wait to see the wedding ceremony! *___*
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hummm, very interesting concept. I like it, but I see in the story that you have a female nurse, so there must be more females living. Are there only male breeders and females can longer have babies? If both the twins were able to have babies did they both give birth and repopulate the world? I really do like the way this story is going and can’t wait to read what happens next. But I really am curious as to why they don’t do the same with females. I hope that Daire will find happiness with his mate, and that Aleksei’s heart will melt. Really good story and I will keep checking for more updates, thank you.
PS: what happens when they give birth are the babies taken away? Do the bearers and breeders stay in the institution and continue to have children until they can no longer have them? Aghhh I hope you update soon.
PS: what happens when they give birth are the babies taken away? Do the bearers and breeders stay in the institution and continue to have children until they can no longer have them? Aghhh I hope you update soon.