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What is Aleksei's problem? Doesn't he realise he has to grow up now, and act like a man, if he wants to be a father? Oh, but will him and Daire be allowed to raise any children they might have as their own? Or will the institute take the little one's away? I don't remember reading about what happens to any babies that are born....

Few errors spotted for you.....
Caelyn gave a low whistle. “His *fist* (first) time. Bet Aleksei’s gonna love that.”

“Since he hasn’t been able to keep anything *down. He’s* (down, he's) become severely dehydrated, as I said before,” the doctor continued.

Make sure you don’t forget to come and see me in a couple (of) weeks for your checkup,” the doctor said.

“Why the hell are you here?” Aleksei hissed, ignoring both of them. (This sentence is a contridiction of itself. If he were ignoring them, he wouldn't be speaking to them.)

Caelyn and Aidan both held their breath as Daire prepared to tell his mate the big news.” (Take away the speech brackets at the end of the sentence.)

His tongue left my mouth and trailed down my neck.
His tongue left my mouth and trailed down my neck (Just wondered why you used this sentence twice.)

There we go....

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, where we'll hopefully find out if Aleksei finally accepts Daire with open arms...

Ah! Preggers his first time! Poor thing... >.<

Well, so far it's quite nice, it's something fast paced and not utterly elaborate.
I thought Daire's heat scene was really funny.

I am really eager to know what Aleksei will do now haha xD
Thanks for this~

great story, love the idea behind it. I have a question though, are they both genders? do they have both sets of reproductive organs? and if so why are they put as males. also if they do have both sets of organs (and by penis organs i mean penis and vagina) do the breeders have just a penis like a regular man? just some questions i have. if you want you can e-mail me.

OMG!! He's pregnant?!? O___O Aleksei must be in shock! LOL * is laughing even tho it's not suppose to be funny* :D

Man, I really liked this update! I hope Daire will get better! ^^

Thanks alot for the update! It's appreciated! :D XDD

I can't wait to read more! Update again, whenever you can! *hugs*

Aleksei is a prize prig! 'This changes nothing'....Who is he trying to kid? It changes EVERYTHING! He's just taken his mate's virginity, and he's saying it meant nothing? Oh, I want to punch him one, lol....

One typo for you this time....

Aleksei felt himself growing warm and knew he *could* (couldn't) resist much longer.

Oh, and I just thought I'd ask...How come the beginning part of this chapter, telling the story of Hayden and Harou, is the same as chapter four? Did you just forget to change it when you posted this chapter?

i love you story it different becasue your getting two stories at once nice going update soo ok

And here I thought that little Daire was too timid to deal with Aleksei, I laughed when he actually was speaking aloud of his opinion of his stubborn and rude mate. I just know that Daire is the one to melt a cold heart. But I have to wonder that perhaps Aleksei is also having trouble to adjust to his new life, or is it possible he had a mate before and maybe lost him while giving birth and maybe that is why he is being so uncaring, afraid of having to go through that again? Falling in love and losing the love of your life can be very hard to get past. I just wonder if he had loved before, and the object of his desire was mated to someone else or he died. Seems to me that Aleksei is a wounded soul. I’m so glad you added a new chapter and I just can’t wait to read more and see what happens next, I’m glad that Daire won’t be a push over, he needs to be equally strong to deal with his mate. I hope you update soon I’m on pins and needles here.

Glad to see more of this; thanks for the update!

Yay! You're back! I was getting worried there^^;;
I can't wait for the next chapter!