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i really really hate john....but im happy that D and A get their own place, i really hope he's not pregnant.

I don't mind long chaters. XD I like this story and if I have more to read the better for me! ;) I hope they will execute him, I mean YOU will execute that bastard. It would be good for Caelyn and I like that Daire and him mate will live together. XD Thatnk you for this wonderful chapter!

I think Halen should die, then Aidan and Caelyn could be together. Especially since Aidan is displaying more aggressive qualities like the Breeders as of late. YAY!

Did Halen raped Daire?? O__o OMG!

If he did, then how come Daire only remembered him as " a Breeder he knew from a distance "??

Shouldn't Daire know that he's Caelyn's mate or something?? hummm Or maybe I got something wrong? >___>

Anyways, other then that little confusion, I liked the update! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen now! XD

I suspected. ;P
YOU ARE SO EVIL!!! When will be the next part? I hope soon. *puppy eyes* Poor Darie... I'm very curious what his mate did to his rapist. I hope something really awful, like cutting the device the crime was made witth. XDDD
I think that putting Bryan insted of Darie's friends was a good move. I like it as it is.
I'll be very impatiently waiting for the next chapter. XD

Hi :) I'm reviewing here since you haven't updated on Fiction Press (I think there's a log in problem :S).

The new chapter was gooooooooood!! I just love Daire and Aleksei. Aleksei is changing a lot O_o But its good :P I already want to read more!!! :( That always happens with awesome fanfics.....
Oh, on one part, even if it can be understood, when Daire had his hand in his abdomen and removes it, you wrote:''Daire smiled to himself and removed his abdomen.'' It sounds like he removes his abdomen, instead of his hand...O_o....XD...Just wanted to point it out :) Hope its ok :(
Well anyway, can't wait to read more! Until the next chapter then :3

TT_TT That was so sad! D: They had to give Colin to foster parents. :( And Aleksei finally confessed. ^^ Good work! Keep it up and late as read some more... :D

wow, that's so great...first of all, thank you so much for your last quick updates, i enjoyed them really...i'm so happy for daire and aleksej..but it's sad that they lost their little boy....will they get him back, will they have one more baby? i hope they'll be a real couple now, they're so cute together, daire who can love and understand aleksej and take his old sorrow away and aleksej who loves and protects daire. i'm so curious!!!! i'm looking forward for the next chapter.

Lol I love that they had placed a bet on it too. WOOT finally he's coming around

PLEASE make baby Colin to stay with Daire *puppy eyes*