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March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! Once I started to read it I couldn't stop.
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What the hell? how did bryan die from a gunshot wound to his SHOULDER!? who th hell dies from a shoulder wound? NOBODY! thats who. no offense but i think you might need to alter that part a little. its a bit ridiculous.. other that that.. love the story.
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You really need to put a warning up that this contains sex between minors
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I'm only on ch 22 but so far it's very good. Although I must say I was not impressed when they took Colin away...I cried. I'm hoping that they escape and get Colin back. I also hope you have Calyn and Aiden get together and find someone for Bryan. They all deserve someone.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
comence throwing of the dead fruit. You killed Asiden....WHY....couldn't u just have him hit in the shoulder and survive??? Anyways...why isn't Alden (the other mixed boy) included in the escape plan....he's been pretty close to the group??? Kinda mean to leave him alone. I'm still reading though...not done yet.
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story is great and I am eager to see what happens next. I do wonder why the Bearers are not allowed to keep their babies. I would not be eager to get pregnant if I knew that i would have to give my baby up. Also it seems that maybe Halen was getting frustrated because he had not been getting any action from Caelyn. Nine months is a long time. I was kind of hoping that Daire would escape with the Colin before they took him away.
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please update soon.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love how Aleksei is all caring now, but still has the bad boy image.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
D: Daire was raped and John is a major asshole, I hope both Halen and John will die in the near future! D: Maybe the Institute will burn along with the Council and John? I can always hope... :D I can't wait to read more. ^^
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love your story but please tell me something bad is going to happen to John really soon! I hate that guy he's got a total god complex. That's my only request oh and Halen too. He's just an asshole. Thanks can't wait to read the next chapter!