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for Dirty Little Secret

by sorean

person Arsinen
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm..... Bobby is a fucking jerk I feel like punching him. Poor Shay.... hehe I actually like Claire's that place has some pretty cool earrings. ^^ I buy my earrings there. Now off to read next chappie.
person Arsinen
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awkward....I guess I just expected Jake to be the one in the lead not Shay. And the transition from Shay feeling emotionally beaten to horny was a little too fast but it worked out. hehe awkward and all but it was still hot. Anyways until the next update. Ja ne. ^^
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! <333333333

Gahhh UPDATE UPDATE!! *is now your fangirl*
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have to keep writing! This is so good! I cant wait to see what happens next..please update soon. xD
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was amazing! I hope that you update again soon!
person MibuWolf
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story! I'm dying inside that you're such a quick updater. Do you know how happy that makes me? Youre brilliant with words. *bows down before the author* You've got my respect and my infinite attention. Looking forward to tomorrow.. no wait... later. Wow, is it really that late? hmm.. anywho.. Great job. *biiig wink*
person Koira
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, simple and sweet :)
person Arsinen
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hai, hai I'm reviewing. :P I like it oooh kissy kissy though it was their first and kind of awkward but still it satisfies my inner yaoi fangirl. ^^ Speaking of Dir en grey I haven't seen them live yet I could've this past year in february but due to some....issues I couldn't go and my friend sold my ticket to a fan who wanted one. :( I was so sad because I think they were here the day before Kyo's birthday. *grumbles glares at parents* Small world I gotta say and that is really good Dir en grey is getting bigger and bigger. I don't meet many people who know who they are so yeah. ^^ I cracked up so much when Jameson made that comment about Shay's 'talents' hehe I wish the hot teacher that worked at my school would have said something to me like that....*pout* Anwyays until next time keep those chappies coming.
person Muffin
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story...teacher -student love is hott
person Arsinen
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAIIII! This is really good I love it read both chapters in one go.....not a lot but yeah. ^^ Anyways I loved the way you described Mr. Jameson playing guitar it almost sounded like you were describing Kaoru from Dir en grey awesome band by the way if you are interested in a band that does not sing in English. They are Japanese so yeah but still they're freaing awesome. WHOA way off subject I like Shay and I can't wait until their next 'date' hopefully it's excitingg. By the way is Shay like lead tenor? Or what because Jameson was like the others look to you... or something like that during there 'one-on-one' chat. ^^ Please update soon. I'll be waiting I promise to review if you update like... right now. LOL. Nah just kidding but I will review when you update. So update soon. Ciao.